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Reviews For A Secret Gift
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2024 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Marcs Tee (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, I actually really like Hermione, and Harry's protectiveness over Nephele 🦉d84;a039;
Title: A Suspicious Gift 09 Jun 2022 7:30 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter. I’m enjoying seeing Snape work behind the scenes towards Harry’s well being.
Title: A Suspicious Gift 05 Nov 2020 2:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very emotional chapter
Title: A Suspicious Gift 24 Sep 2008 5:45 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you are carrying on with the story, Mila. This was lovely. Though I do have to say that Harry seems much younger than he is (I take it this is fifth year) and I would have thought he would know how to hold an owl, considering he had Hedwig for going on five years. I know you said that he was in a poor mental state..I suppose that is why he appears...'delicate' I suppose is the word I am looking for. He did not say one word during the exchange, I don't think. Ron and Hermione spoke for him.

    I wonder who the acquaintance is that Sev has to contact.

    And I don't know if I ever asked you before, but I wonder how Sev found out he is HArry's father and how long he has known.

    Keep up the good work.

    ~LesleY~
Title: A Suspicious Gift 22 Sep 2008 8:36 am
Reviewer: kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter
    i wonder what happened to hedwig?

    Author's Response: Thanks! Severus will go to ask Dusleys  what happened to Hedwig... :-)
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this tale; please continue writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much, Mila

Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story shows alot of promise, and I love the way that you have portrayed Snape. I can't believe that you had a complaint that Snape was too cross with the kids--that is a hundred percent Snapish reaction. Please keep him snarky.

    You're right - Sev is the ultimate disciplinarian, and I hate when he's portrayed as too mushy!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I will definitely try to keep him from mushy *shudders* If I ever slip, let me know. Mila
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really touching story so far and I'm looking forward to its continuation!
    Will Severus confide in Minerva, will he get a min healer for is son and will it be possible for him to help his son and acknowledge him?
    Please, go on writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I can't answer your questions - you would stop reading :-) Mila 
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 3:25 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::glares::

    Is there a particular reason Snape is acting like a total bastard? ::raises eyebrows:: Simply curious, my dear.

    Last chapter I thought he was going to punish the Dursleys. I know that Harry doesn't know he's his father but isn't that supposed to change? And how'll Harry react to the news?

    Update soon.

    Yours,
    Lady Julie Snape.

    Author's Response: Ah, you seem to be angry with me. Curious... I am going to punish the Dursleys, don't worry. *waves* Mila
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 2:36 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! I hope he will eventually tell Severus or Min about what really happened. It was funny when Sev made them leave and then come back in to greet them properly.

    My dad made my little nephews do that one time when they came inside slamming doors and being really loud and ignoring him when he came to visit.

    Manners are an important concept.

    Post soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Snapegirl! I had a complaint about Snape being too cross with the kids. But who is Severus if not a disciplinarian? Yay for your dad. Mila

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