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Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 24 Jan 2016 12:25 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    -sigh- It's so hard, at times, to admit when your wrong or made a mistake. Severus and Ivy did a good job. But then again they a good writer writing their lines for them... what was her name again? hmmmmmm. (forgive me if you are a guy and not a girl, let me know will you?)

    Author's Response: I'm I girl. :) Thanks for all your wonderful reviews. They make my day!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 10 Nov 2013 6:40 pm
Reviewer: Elizabeth Severine Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love all of your work. This is great, like everything else :D
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 28 Mar 2011 10:02 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    I agree with the anon reviewer named "new". Sev and Ivy keep using the word "stupid", they know how quickly the kid jumps to conclusions, next thing we know Harry will be going around like "i'm stupid, i'm stupiddddd!" Wait...lol he's already done that before loool. Well, that's just another reason they should refrain from using trigger language around him. It seems they forget really easily that he was abused.
    Either way, i'm glad that they stopped his punishment with a spanking and they didn't ground him or set him lines. I'm afraid that would have broken him.
    So yep, great chapter, cept for the language towards Mr. Snape Potter. But, you can't have your cake and eat it too...or brownies. I like brownies.
    ^_^

    Author's Response:

    Yes, trigger words are really bad. Still remember Severus and Co. aren#t perfect. It would be too easy if they were and I couldn't write a story about it. :)

    Thanks for yoru thoughts.

     

Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 04 Jan 2010 12:31 am
Reviewer: icecream_effn_sundae (Signed) [Report This]
    good update :) a lil short, but it was a good place to end it.
    cant wait for the next update!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 03 Jan 2010 1:51 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad he didn't drink the potion. thanks for the great updates, keep up the good work!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 31 Dec 2009 1:49 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter xx

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 31 Dec 2009 11:09 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter. Ivy brings a much needed balance to Severus and Harry, thank God. Where would our two favorite boys be without that?

    I love how embarrassed Harry was at the end of the chapter. No one wants to see their parents making out, lol.

    I'm hoping that Severus and Ivy were finally able to get their message to sink in to Harry's thick head. I guess we'll have to wait and see.

    Thanks for sharing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Take care.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 31 Dec 2009 9:57 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel bad for allof them...their reactions were understandable of course, but Severus did go too far and I'm glad that he realizes it. I hope that Harry now sees that they will love him no matter what and would never send him away.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 31 Dec 2009 1:21 am
Reviewer: New (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry about your drama re: Christmas. Sounds like mine! Awful!
    Great chapter. I do wish Harry had told Snape "the spanking hurt less than you calling me stupid." Snape needs to know how much that hurts!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 59 - Consequences 30 Dec 2009 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was a great chapter!

    I'm so sorry that you're going through a rough time. :( I hope and pray that things get better for you.

    You'd never know it by your writing. I'm so pleased that Severus and Ivy apolgised for spanking Harry so harshly. That was so sweet, and now I've got the warm fuzzies. :)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, things surely will become better in future or at least we will get used to the actual situation. It was just a great shock and nobody was expecting what happened and exactly on Chrismas Eve. But nobody died, we just lost family members on a different way.

    I'm glad you like the chapter! This one was written many weeks ago. ;) At the moment I'm writing on chapter 65.

    Thanks for your nice review! 

    Sunny


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