Loved the chapter. Please don't wait to long to update.
| Title: Ecalp Dluammirg
| 22 Apr 2007 4:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous)
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*goans* noooooooooo....... please please just update this next chapter really fast and i won't complain at all!!!! PLEASE!!! great chapter... please please please update quickly
| Title: Ecalp Dluammirg
| 22 Apr 2007 3:45 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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What an excellent chapter. Fast moving and full of excitement. I had forgotten about Draco,so what a surprise that wise and now poor Harry.....I don't know if I can wait until the next update....but I guess I must but please HURRY.
| Title: Ecalp Dluammirg
| 22 Apr 2007 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: NitaPotter (Anonymous)
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Oh my!!! Evil cliffy!!! Truly evil cliffy!!! So...is Harry still in Grimmauld Place, down in the kitchen...having been poisoned by Mrs Black????? Something is definitely wrong here!!!! I hope you do well in your finals and congratulations on your upcoming graduation!!!!!
Nita
oh no.... what a cruel place to stop... Please go on soon - I can't wait for the update :-)
I see what you mean about a cliffie, Laura! And with Draco's loyalties, he could've easily left the frogs there!
Oh no! Where did harry go? Poor guy, I hope that that Snape finds him in time! Great chapter. I liked the introduction to Draco. I loved how in control Snape kind of was- telling the boys what to do and they just ignored him and kept on yelling- great contrast!
Thanks for updating!
| Title: Trust
| 15 Apr 2007 8:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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oh please update soon!!! i love this fiction and cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
| Title: Trust
| 13 Apr 2007 10:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide Cheque (Anonymous)
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Yay, more Draco! You know I like him.
I expect him to have had serious troubles with the past couple of days; and, no matter how fond I am of Draco and Harry getting along, it's entirely possible that Draco will hate him more than ever, blaming him for everything.
I hope, through the re-introduction of Draco, you at least partially allude to Lucius's change of heart.
Funny, I thought your Ron wouldn't be so upset as the others concerning Snape's guardianship of Harry. After all, he's the one who's been bringing Harry to Snape all along, in the night - and, there was that time where he brought Harry down to the Gryffindor common room and Harry was swept up into Snape's arms. Ron, more than anybody save Harry and Snape themselves, has seen their true relationship firsthand. Up until now he has viewed it with relative equanimity. I think (hope?) that once he gets over his surprise, he will stop being disapproving.
Also, Ron's relationship with Harry has turned distinctly big-brother-like, a shift that Ron seems to have enjoyed. I think Ron will continue to be very protective of Harry despite the fact that Harry has regained his age and height, and maybe this is why he had such a strong reaction to Harry not becoming a Weasley: he half *already* thought he had a little brother. It doesn't seem like he'll want to let go of that new role.
So far this story is great! I hope you continue soon.
-Kirinin
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews. I really do enjoy reading them all. As for a couple of your questions/comments. Um the first, Ron's reaction- I wanted him to react as he did, because he'd just been preparing up a room for his "little" brother. He won't stay mad forever. Another of your comments, I did give Lucius a reason... and I know I haven't said it yet... perhaps it's well overdue. It's hard to juggle so many story elements, but I'll try to work it in the next chapter or so...
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