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Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 7:22 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This was such a great chapter I cant even find the words to describe it! Great job though. Hermione bugged me so much she was so in cannon good job! (And I really mean it in a good way. Hermione bugs me so much in the books and you captured her perfectly so be proud) I can hardly wait until you update again!
    ~Jan

Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 6:25 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job of building Harry up to the boiling point of frustration, anger, etc.  I'm looking forward to seeing how Dumbledore, and particularly Snape, react to him now.  You don't have Harry dwell on Snape's comment of "isn't that what you wanted?"  Hope you get back to that soon.
Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 5:28 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, so sweet and sad. I like to see Hermione doing the whole mother thing, and Ron sticking by Harry's side. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 4:33 am
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was great.
    Harry acts so small even though he tries acting his age. I like that about this story. It keeps the child in Harry rather have him acting the age he actually is in just a smaller body. Keep up the great work! Update Soon!

    Author's Response: I was hoping to have a balance between an eleven year old boy that has the memories of a sixteen year old...
Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 4:28 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Love it, love it, love it. Poor Harry. I really liked that all these things seem to be happening, that he lost his control, refused to do things and is having a "temper tantrum". I'm really curious as to what is wrong with Snape. Is Voldemort hurting him with the cruciatus, other deark people or is it something in the Order like Dumbledore who is doing this to him? I'm so curious.

    Great chapter, good development.


    Author's Response: Thanks! HHhmm I don't know how else to respond without giving my secrets away. Never fear though, answers will be coming soon.
Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 4:14 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm not surprised that Harry blew up--just that it took so long.  What is up with everyone?  He's in the body of an 11 year old doing the work of a sixteen year old and no one is cutting him any slack.  Plus, that new defense teacher gives me the creeps.  Yes, please update soon!

    Author's Response: Yes, I could say that it surprises me that it took so long, but I wrote it that way. Although, by now, they've all realized how hard things have been for Harry.
Title: Explosion 17 Jul 2006 1:39 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, very moving. I really feel for Harry, the way all this emotional trauma seems to be heaping up on him. I hope something bad happens to Quinn soon, he definitely deserves it. I know the next chapter will probably be pretty emotionally intense too, with the visit to Dumbledore's office, but you might think of putting something a little light-hearted in to ease the tension a bit.


    Author's Response: Yes, I agree on the tension... time to let up.
Title: Classes Continue 07 Jul 2006 11:38 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    lots of going on with Harry, that is exactly reason I love your fic! Your fic is

    angst-freak's dream! again wonderful chappy! Please write again soon! Ps. I'm

    happy you aren't putting too much weight on romance stuff.



    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the way things are going. I'm not much of a romance buff. And I didn't want people to get the wrong impression of my story because I mentioned the dances.
Title: Classes Continue 06 Jul 2006 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    HURRY!!!!!!!!!! I'm leaving soon and im wanna see what happens!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Leaving to where? You won't have access to the internet or something?
Title: Classes Continue 06 Jul 2006 8:19 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]

    You are definetly evil! Such a cliff hanger! Hmm... what does Dumbledore mean? And is there going to be any more Harry and Snape angst/bonding? I also think its cool that you put the author note so that we knew what was going on, and gave an explenation. Most authors just say something along the lines of "Shut up with the complaining if you dont like the story too bad". Good job with this fic!

    Update soon!!!!
    ~Spiorad


    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I'm glad you like my fic! As for my author's note... I don't mind people saying bad things about my fic, opinions are opinions. I didn't want to be rude, but I wanted readers to know that I wasn't going to change the way my fic was going...


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