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Title: Classes Continue 05 Jul 2006 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow!  Great chapter!  I love your characterizations.... they're simply wonderful.  Anyway... wow, the next chapter is "Explosion"!  That sounds like a Potion's accident to me!  I can't wait, let's see some brutal injuries that only Snape can tend to!  Excellent chapter... and I eagerly await the next one.  You are a very talented author.

     Keep up the excellent work!

    Saphire Starlet



    Author's Response: I was quite happy with the next chapters title. I felt... clever... I hope it lives up to expectations!
Title: Classes Continue 05 Jul 2006 3:52 am
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this fic to pieces! It just keeps getting better!!!

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so. I don't really feel like I'm getting better. But perhaps it's experiance?
Title: Classes Continue 04 Jul 2006 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Brittany (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The defense teacher really does freak me out... That guy's creepy!! Snape's not acting like himself, and what's with Dumbledore??? Ah well, I guess I'll get these answers but still... I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter... :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad the DADA teacher is freaking you out. That was my intention. It's hard to write an original character... at least I think so. I don't have JK Rowling's amazing introductions and character developement to rely on for a good character.
Title: Classes Continue 04 Jul 2006 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Carolyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just wanted to say that this is my favorite story right now.

     

    Even though it is agonizing waiting for more fatherly moments from Snape towards Harry, I know it is going to be even more satisfying when the story gets there at its own pace.

     

    I also love your defense professor. At first I thought he was being mean to Harry because of his small size, but now I am thinking that maybe he is the only professor who realizes that Harry can't physically keep up with 16 and 17 year olds in his 11 year old body. I hope the other professors will come to realize this soon.

     

    I am surprised that you don’t have more reviews, particularly on Fanfiction.net. Maybe you could try changing the summary, because your story is far better then many of the stories with hundreds of reviews.

     

    I hope you update sooner then expected, because I am really looking forward to it!

     



    Author's Response: My beta helped me with my summary. Is it better now? There's only so much space allowed for a summary on fanfiction.
Title: Classes Continue 04 Jul 2006 8:40 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    What a mean way to end the chapter. *cries*  I want to know what happened to Harry, and what's up with Snape still, oh and the DADA teacher, cause he's just weird(still mean though!)  And umm I dunno, I just want to read more.  *sniffles* sigh* I suppose I'll wait two weeks. :D  good chapter. well written.  As Jan would say 5 chocolate frogs. I say 5pts...haha.   
Title: Classes Continue 04 Jul 2006 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Ellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey! How could you stop in such a moment!!!! You are very cruel to us! Update soon, please!!! :P That was a very good chapter.
Title: Classes Continue 04 Jul 2006 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH my very interesting developments. Can't wait for more
Title: Classes Continue 04 Jul 2006 4:21 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please surprise us with an earlier review.  It is a great story.
Title: Classes Begin 28 Jun 2006 11:38 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. *shakes head* What is Snape's problem now? And what is the DADA Prof's deal? Is he treating Harry like a 1st year because he looks like one? I gotta agree wit Ron and Terry. The man is worse then Snape, not to mention seriously analretentive. *smirk* Great chap! More Please! ASAP!
Title: Classes Begin 28 Jun 2006 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Back to the school... now next guestion is how things will go on with Severus and Harry, of course in private only. I don't suppose Severus will actually tell how deeple he cares about Harry, perhaps just is more gentle then he ever was and actually teaches him how to do occlumency. Please update soon!

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