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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
Well I´m glad Snape don´t mind to be call Snape by Harry, cos he make it sound so nice, and when ha was younger it used to sound more like a Dad than anything… “Harry had the grace to look guilty, a little…” That and other actions and thoughts of Harry are so funny and typical of a teenager… I´m glad you make him act his age. I don´t like pretty much stories where he is 17 and act all like and adult, etc… The silent threat of Snape´s wand pointing the way was very original, he was loosening his patience. Snape will probably grow grey hair with Harry and Malfoy under the same roof… I´m begging you now (and on my knees): please don’t start writing on Malfoys point of view, I detest him! And don’t see a chance in both of them to start getting along ever! I like him here and there just to cause a bit of antagonism; like the way you have used him in this chapter…For instance, I enjoy the fighting (in book 5) after the quidditch match, a very boy thing to do. Understand this; i´m not a violent person; but their confrontations are a must, it just seems natural…. If snape ever find where Harry is… I suppose they ought to talk about the captivity, obviously Harry has sequels about it. It is sad to see that Snape is wondering why he has adopted Harry, I thought that he already knows why. I thought that he cares and that he knows how to deal with a teenage boy, or two by the case…. Harry was quite stupid to eat something so suspicious (might not have been in his right state of mind..)….But I love him that way, it wouldn’t be fun if he doesn`t place himself in some difficult situations…he has talent for that.. I hope you update soon I´m still wondering what in reality has happened to him…and where has he end up being. I know , I know (hands up) my English is dreadful but is stronger that me, I have to review…Hope you understand ; ) Good luck, Lynx Lw
I really love the personality of your Snape he is so grumpy…and serious but still you manage to make him act caring in a way….every now and then… It was very funny that bit of teenage angst, I mean when Harry was naked and all that jeje. Oh I know its kind of a cliché but it would have been nice in the argument that arouse during breakfast, when Harry got very angry, to make him shake things as a consequence of a stream of uncontrolled wandless magic, or something of the sort. It wouldn’t be illogical to think of this kind of magic to be linked to emotions…and in your story he has done some… I was quiet surprise by rons reaction, very mature of him. I had a great time reading Harry and Snape´s conversation over the paper work, they have this special chemistry (I don’t have a better word to describe it, at least not in English…: ) between them. I find reassuring that Snape has been thinking ahead and is taking care of everything. Keep writing, so I can keep reading :) Lynx Lw
Gosh, though, if the house itself could move to poison its occupants, you'd think it would've done so before, with Remus or Sirius or any member of the Order, for example. Unless it requires Draco's aid? But if Draco was confined to his quarters until just then, how did he make a poison? (Just happen to have one on him?) Or perhaps there was some sort of passageway that Draco was led to somehow, with the help of the house itself? Ah, well - pointless speculation, I'm sure. I'm still enjoying this immensely! -K
ahhh the tension. ok, seriously, after this gets 'resolved' either harry has to deck draco or draco has do punch harry. you just have to. especially that draco's still being all evil death eater-y. totaly. i love this story
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