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Title: Chapter 42: Comings and Goings 13 Dec 2009 12:34 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wo nderful chapter I loved how Severus destroyed the horcrux very masterful. The adoption was so sweet they are so good together thank you for writing and to Raewhit for the translation
Title: Chapter 42: Comings and Goings 08 Dec 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful!

    I love Potter-Snape!

    V.

    Author's Response: so does Severus, even if he won't admit it ;-)
Title: Chapter 42: Comings and Goings 08 Dec 2009 11:58 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...I can just imagine the problems the Ministry is going to try to make, but in the end the love that binds Severus and Harry as a family will overcome all obstacles. I'm glad that Harry finally signed the papers and look forward to seeing all the reactions of the people around them.

    I'm torn about how I feel about Remus and his son. I feel kinda bad that Remus is having such difficulty getting close to Loki, but at the same time I think perhaps he is pushing too hard in his quest to establish a family bond between them.

    Severus is right about Albus; he will use anyone and anything to win his precious war, even if it hurts those around him. I fear that Remus is going to be one of those hurt and Harry as well. I hope that Severus will be able to figure out a way to keep Harry safe.

    Author's Response:

    Oh, trust me, there will be no end with those troubles indeed.

    As for Remus, I can tell you that everyone one is the story is very torn about him. Even Dumbledore and Harry are a bit cross at him, and even Snape can feel a bit sorry for him. But really, Remus is a lot out of line most of the time when it comes to his newfound son.

     

Title: Chapter 42: Comings and Goings 08 Dec 2009 8:58 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely developments!

    I'm so glad to get an update to one of my favourite stories.

    YAY!

    Author's Response: glad you like it ;-)
Title: Chapter 42: Comings and Goings 08 Dec 2009 5:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, you must have read my mind. I wished so much that you would update, and lo and behold, here you are!! And what a chapter.

    I'm so glad that Shadow is back.

    I really hope that Harry can be adopted by Severus and that the Ministry doesn't spoil it all.

    Loki really worries me. I'm worried about Draco too though; Lucius is evil. I hope that Severus and Dumbledore can protect him.

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you still enjoy this !

    You are right to be worried about Loki, this guy is trouble...

Title: Chapter 42: Comings and Goings 08 Dec 2009 5:11 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful

    Author's Response: thanks !
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 08 Nov 2009 3:17 am
Reviewer: Helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful tale!
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 06 Nov 2009 11:46 pm
Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent explanation of the firth chapter intervention of the deaths and the assignment of Snape as a guardian.

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 9- Pride and Prejudice 06 Nov 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely stunning, beautiful tale
Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 28 Oct 2009 1:12 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! I know Remus wants to give his son a chance, but putting Harry and all the other students in danger isn't an option. They will need to find a good way to contain him.

    I wonder what will be discovered about the locket. I hope that Severus and Albus will discover it's secrets and be able to help keep Harry from being harmed further by it's influence.

    When is Severus going to tell Harry about the change in his mark? I have a feeling that Harry needs to know. I understand Severus' reticence though. I know that Harry won't abuse their connection, as he loves Severus very much.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    thank you !

    Remus is actually being a bit unreasonable about this. But well, he has his reasons!

    There is a lot to be said about the locket! about the mark, Severus is certainly going to keep it a secret as long as he can. He is really scared about Harry's reaction to this...


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