I wonder. Severus has this bad habit of assuming Harry is lying when he's telling the truth, but he's just as capable of assuming Harry's telling the truth when he's lying and saying what Severus expects to hear.
I like the way you've woven bits of an altered OotP into this!
Oops. I wonder where Harry and Sybil are?
Manipulated by Dumbledore again! :-)
Yeah! You've updated! Happy now...
And I still love the interaction between Alastor and Severus. Those two keep that up and someone is going to get doubly hexed for talking about UST! lol!
As always, I love Snape's lines.
Also did like that Lucius found out that Narcissa and Draco are safe. That's one thing good about Lucius, he was a loving father, even if he did believe in hurting people.
Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
| Title: I Wasn't Born to Walk On Water
| 02 Jan 2010 10:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, Azkaban still sounds creepy, even without the Dementors.
I think that Lucius must have been quite surprised when Snape slipped the paper through the bars.
Poor Harry, he must suspect that removing a Horcrux within him, is not as simple as it sounds.
Great chappie.
Hmmm..wyrsa...aren't those from the Valdemor series by Mercedes Lackey?
Good chapter, I love to see Severus/Alastor interaction even if its brief lol :)
| Title: We All Start in the Streams
| 17 Oct 2009 12:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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It was a good story so far and I enjoyed but am getting off the train here.
I have never understood the need of many authors to go ahead and mutilate a character. The repercussions are severe, frankly I think the rest of us can't imagine them, and well, I am yet to see anyone do it justice in their descriptions. They also do not add to a story at all, just detract from it. Meh, I am sorry you went down this road but when Severus started missing body parts that was it for me. It was a good story until then, so thank you for that.
Lols more fun from Alastor and Severus, gotta love it, I love severus' little thoughts about things to do to Alastor :D
| Title: In the Middle of the Night
| 14 Oct 2009 3:23 pm
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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I am always happy to see another chapter!!! So Snapey to be smug his wayward eye scared a child and made him cry! I am still enjoying the Alaistar/Snape interactions as well. I cannot imagine how Albus is going to react to the news that Harry knows about Horcruxes - looking forward to this as you continue this great story
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