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Reviews For A Secret Gift
Title: An Overheard Conversation 19 Oct 2008 2:44 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh you are SO SO naughty!!!

    How could you end like that? :(

    Your story is so sweet and original. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction. Nice work! Hope that you will update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Pandora! Mila

Title: An Overheard Conversation 19 Oct 2008 12:34 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh an evil cliffie! You HAVE to update soon, I want to see how Harry reacts to the news that Snape is his father.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words, Mila
Title: An Expert on Owls 10 Oct 2008 1:53 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really different Snape to normal! I think I quite like him, though at first I was unsure. Having the owl as a go between was quite a good idea. Just watch out for some spelling mistakes in the story though. Like 'Let's to' instead of 'let's go'.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. I suppose Snape is out of character (in comparison to canon) but then again, he discovered he was Harry's father....  I corrected the mistake, thank you for telling me! Mila
Title: An Expert on Owls 09 Oct 2008 5:42 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, how sweet! I hope that Sev can finally convince harry to trust him and help him.

    Author's Response: Sev can convince anyone to trust anything, do not worry *grin* Thank you for your review, Mila
Title: An Expert on Owls 09 Oct 2008 4:02 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It must be incredibly hard for Snape to be a complete git to his son. As well, it would be so hard to see your child and not be able to take what's yours.

    Author's Response:

    My response to your review would reveal the plot of the next chapter! So, I will only thank you for your review now, Mila

Title: An Expert on Owls 09 Oct 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the comment about sticking Dumbledore's lemon drops where the sun don't shine! Too funny!

    Aw, that is so sweet Harry is asleep. Will Snape tell Harry now that he is his father! Oh dear, I wonder how Harry will react if he tells him.

    Author's Response: Thank you *grin*  Severus will soon want to do much more to Albus! Just wait. Mila
Title: An Expert on Owls 08 Oct 2008 11:56 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice story. I am, of course, curious to know how and why Severus is Harry's son, when he found out, etc., etc.

    Please keep writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. How Severus found out will be revealed soon :) Mila
Title: Intangible Gift 08 Oct 2008 11:54 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey Mila.

    Where have I been? I vaguely remember you telling me that you had a new story up on P&S. Did you mean a new chapter? I will have to check out your pername in a moment to see if there is another story.

    But not only do I find one new chapter...but three that I have not read. Quell horreur! (bad French, I know)

    This was great. Scilla is a great OC and I can't wait to see HArry and Scilla together.

    LesleY

    Author's Response: Thank you *waves*
Title: A Private Hell 06 Oct 2008 2:19 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor harry. he really needs some counseling with Scilla. Now he's going to be frantic that Nephele's gone, but she probably went off to hunt, you can't keep an owl indoors all the time, they go crazy.

    Author's Response: Would you believe Albus and Minerva will be against counseling? Ups. Shouldn't have said that, shouldn't have said that. Lol.
Title: A Private Hell 05 Oct 2008 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is just so sweet! And you manage so well to show Harry's innermost feelings and how they are reflected in his actions - very good!!! Some might say that he is acting too childish, but I think with all the pressure and no comfort at all, everybody would start to act like that! I hope, he'll get help now - especially since Nephy is gone, and that Snape might be able to offer more active help later on!
    Thanx for a story well done so far!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your kind words. I am no expert, but I was led to believe that depressed children in their vulnerability tend to retreat into their "better (read younger)" years. His thoughts jumping on silly themes and never lasting too long were supposed to indicate the same, basically. I hope it worked. Lots of Snape in the next chapter. Mila

     


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