No, I don't think that he was too hard on her, although he probably didn't help her image of him any :) Good chappie, can't wait for more! But then, you know I love your work.
No wonder Molly was incapable of doing anything when Severus went over to the Burrow. She was still drained by those [expletive deleted] wards of Muriel's. I have to say I like Sev's "eye-for-an-eye" brand of justice here.
Excellent chapter!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 06 Jan 2010 8:30 pm
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AU indeed with Ginny crying over Severus and Draco hugging Sirius wonderful story thank you
| Title: Chapter 11
| 06 Jan 2010 7:33 pm
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Ok I won't but I am interested in it thank you
| Title: Chapter 6
| 06 Jan 2010 6:38 pm
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Loved the chapter but would like an explanation of the brothers.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 06 Jan 2010 6:13 pm
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Great chapter with harry and Severus but even better the one before Dumbledore deserved that thanks
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This is really good, I just read everything up to this point today and truely want more.. I love the Draco Sirius bonding, it is something you don't read often.. and Ginny and Molly woo and Sev versus Muriel a work of art!
Good chappie, although as you said rather short. I'm curious what Sev has to say to Molly--if Ginny's telling the truth, then she tried her damndest and it's really NOT her fault.
Read it again,great start, especially the inner monologue of Severus.
Haha...I wonder how Draco will react when he discovers that Sirius is the one and only Padfoot? Should be fun!
I'm glad that Severus was able to remove that nasty spell from poor Ginny and that she will soon be returned to the bosom of her family.
I have to wonder what kind of relationship Harry and Draco are going to end up in. Will they be friends or something deeper?
And how about Hermione? Will she and Harry get over the angst her overactive imagination caused or is their friendship over?
Then there's the thing with Ron's eyes. What does that signify and how will it effect the storyline?
Oh, Dear! So many questions, so little time...xD. Great story thus far, awesome chapter! I can't wait to read more!
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