I loved the kitty and McGonagel's punishment was a great idea.
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked!
aw that was cute, good job!
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WONDERFUL chapter! Man, I ADORE this story!!! I loved the talk with Blaise. Well, the talks with everyone really. And then end was soooo cute and sweet! "I have a kitty" - AWWWWW!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like it so much!! I'm blushing! (LOL literally, and in an empty room - I'm such a dumbass) :0) Thanks so much for the review!!
| Title: Psycho
| 27 Jan 2010 8:04 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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That was great! I loved the name psycho kitty, loved that Harry now has someone of his own and loved how you handled the apologies.
Great job!
Author's Response: Yey! Glad you liked!! Thanks for the review!
awww, i loved the update!!! especially psycho kitty!!! :)
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I love Psycho Kitty. I also think that McGonagal did a great job helping and disciplining Harry-- that was quite a bit of progress. The scene with Snape was all one could ask for: awkward situations aren't usually filled with heavy dialogue, and the author once again shows a deft hand at putting just enough into the scene without overwriting. The cat will also be a good learning experience, giving him something to care for and recieve affection from.
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! LOL you made me blush in an empty room. :0) Thanks for the review!!
I know that it is hard for Harry to understand still that his friends, teachers, and most importantly Snape really do care about him, but I fervently hope that he will at least try to consider their feelings before he pulls another such stunt. It's really sad that the Dursleys are such unnatural people to treat a child so badly and worse, to teach THEIR child to do the same. Is it terrible of me to hope that something happens that will make them realize that THEY are the freaks?
It's good to see Psycho again. I'm really glad that Severus had the foresight to see that she would be good for Harry. I look forward to seeing her reactions to Harry's friends...and enemies. :D
Author's Response: LOL I totally agree with you, and no it's not bad of you. :0) (I can't promise anything, 'cause my characters really run the show, but maybe.) I'm glad you like Psycho kitty. So do I :0)
Love Psycho kitty.
Author's Response: Yey!! So do I :0) Rhiannan
| Title: Going Home
| 24 Jan 2010 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: racoon (Anonymous)
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Love the chapter! Looking forward for next))
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! I'm working on the next!
| Title: Going Home
| 17 Jan 2010 4:58 am
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| Reviewer: scalvim (Anonymous)
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I normally dislike WIP's, but I opened an exception for your story, and frankly I've not regretted it for a moment! Thank you for rewarding my faith in good fanfics! Loved your story so far. Your Harry is just so adorably clever and dumb at the same time! also I’m really very keen on your Zabini, I can count by my fingers the fics I've read in which this character (that is by norm a OC), didn't bored me senseless. Oh, on the constructive critic section ( I always put one of these in my reviews) I think you should work more on your Dumbledore, I like him and all, and your great jokes and awesomely sarcastic sense of humor, do make him a likable character, but as a reader I felt that there was something missing in his characterization, maybe because your main characters have such strong personalities it makes Dumbledore seem kind of blank to me, but it’s still fine 'cause he does make its contribution to the flow of the story. To finish this review in a high note, because that's what you most sincerely deserve for writing such a great fic, your Snape touched my heart, and that says it all. This said consider this review a bribe, from fanfiction readers all around the world (I'm from Portugal, so you’ve reached this far,lol) and please update soon!XD (almost forgot, if you wish to reply to this review, please check the name scalvim in the search by Author section on Fanfiction.com, and leave me a message!thanks!)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing my fic!! I'm so glad you read and enjoyed it! I especially appreciate the constructive criticism on Dumbledore - I think you're right, and I haven't focussed on pinning down his character as much as I should. As for the update, for the moment I'm working on Outcast's Alley, but I'm almost finished the chapter, and LDTH will update as soon after that as I can manage. (Generally around a week.) I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic, and I thank you again for reviewing, Rhiannan
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