Potions and Snitches
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Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    A very enjoyable chapter-- who can resist kitten time? I kept expecting to find out the kitten had grabbed on and came with them when they apperated (it's a weird purple thing after all). Severus is really transforming into a parent-- it feels very realistic and I think it's as cute as Albus and Minerva obviously think it is. Harry is making some definate progress. That slap in the face was horrible, but in some ways so much better than the lie he was telling himself.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked!! Yeah, the scene with the kitten was fun to write - lots more fun than most of the rest of the chapter. :0( But it needed to happen, I think. Thanks for the review!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 2:21 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I really love this story.

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you liked! Thanks for the review!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 1:23 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    whens harry gonna get crookshanks? coz im assuming that was the angry kitten =D great chapter

    Author's Response: LOL I would point out that crookshanks is orange, not purple. LOL angry kitty. She's modeled off one of my cats, when he was a kitten. He was completely feral when we got him, 'cause some old lady had been keeping him in a birdcage, but didn't know the first thing about how to gentle a kitten, but he was so tiny that by the time he was an adult it didn't matter. It was hilarious, though - you'd go into the room where he was and he'd get really mad and hiss and spit at you all over the place...but he was so tiny that even the hiss didn't make any noise, so it just looked like he was making faces. It was adorable. :0) Anyway glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for the review!!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 11:12 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    A part of me wishes that Petunia could have proved to have at least a little bit of a heart, but no she had to be a nasty old biddy instead. Poor Harry! He just wants to be loved and was unfortunate enough to be placed with unnatural people instead of a loving family. I hope that he and Severus will be able to work through their problems and soon, so that something like this can be avoided in the futured.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah, part of me wanted to have her treat him better, but she didn't. The fact that she did some to keep him alive doesn't make her a good person by any means. Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for the review!!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 6:38 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Finding out the ugly truth about his "family"

    Author's Response: Yeah. That was seriously yucky. He had to figure it out sometime, though. Thanks for the review!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 6:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, happy happy happy!! Great chappie, and so cute! I love that little house Elf.

    I'm looking forward to seeing more Harry and Snape bonding.


    I'm so glad to see some progress in their relationship. Can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the review!!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 5:37 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY!!!!! I really love this story! You really got me when Harry started crying in the shop when Snape came to get him. That crushed me. I wanted to cry too. And clutch my non-existent Snape plushie.

    I absolutely LOVED the part where Snape called harry his child. Very touching. My heart leaped with joy! ;-)

    I think this may be a typo though, when they get back to Snape's office: -- "just watching as Severus man went into his potions" -- I think the word 'man' should probably be deleted.

    But other than that, it was brilliant! I was very excited to see a new chapter! Thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: YAY!!!!! I'm really glad you like it! And thanks for pointing out the typo...lol "Yeah, Severus man goin' for the potions!" Thanks for the review!!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 5:37 am
Reviewer: kitttyy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    kitty?? pleeaaaseee tell me that cat is going to show up later....i like him/her!!! :D

    Author's Response: LOL I don't give away plot in my reviews, but I liked the kitty too. She's a she, btw. :0) Thanks for the review!
Title: Going Home 12 Jan 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good, angsty chapter. You did an excellent job of showing Harry's feelings changing towards Snape. Loved the caring Snape depicted here.

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you liked!
Title: Safe 10 Jan 2010 8:52 pm
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter! I'm really enjoying this story.

    I'd sign up for 'Hogwarts Grounds' for you. But I've already joined.

    Author's Response: LOL no worries - I got my trophy. :0) Glad you liked the chapter. The next should be out within the week.

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