| Title: Boundaries
| 22 Oct 2009 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Pati (Anonymous)
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wonerful chapter
Author's Response: Glad you like!!
| Title: Boundaries
| 22 Oct 2009 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: MooseThatBite (Anonymous)
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Hey Nannan, Awesome chapter!!, I know I've been far too long without reading it, many apologies. I'd suggest going over the scene with Sinestra one more time though. I'd perhaps tone down the cursing & consider having her get angry somewhat slower. He is HARRY POTTER after all, and she's never met him before, so unless you are meaning for her to be a closet Death Eater, and perhaps even so, maybe have her start off being a bit careful around him. Plus that uncontrolled that fast seemed sorta unlikely. Much love and hugs!! I's like your fic. :) [*[*[:0) cat-in-the-hat bunny.
Author's Response: You always have the most unique user names, sister mine. Thanks for the feedback on Sinestra - I figured there was something up with that scene, but couldn't put a finger on it. I'm glad you like the chapter overall, and I really like your bunny. :0)
I can't wait until you post chapter 21!!
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Happy Bunny! ^.^
Author's Response: :0) Thanks!!
OMG! I love your story! I love your portrayal of Harry as a Slytherin. Its brilliant!
Author's Response: YEY!!! SO glad you like it, and thanks so much for reviewing!! Not many people will review older chapters, and I love it when they do. :0)
I'm torn as to what to say about this story. Don't get me wrong it's fabulous. I guess the best way to put it is...this is a well-written emotional rollarcoaster and I can't wait to see where you take me next.
Author's Response: Hmm...that's sort of what I'm going for, so I suppose that's good. :0) Thanks!!
"'I made a bouncy light-ball!'
'So you did.' Severus said weakly"
Oh, man. That was PRICELESS!!!!!! I ADORE Kallie too. Man, so much of this chapter was just plain hysterical!!! But, sad at the end. Harry really has been through an awful lot.
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked!! Yeah, I found that scene a little sad, too. Not as sad as some, but sad. Sorry to end on a downer. :0/ Thanks for reviewing!!
“Too true,” Snape acknowledged wryly, “I do appear to be slipping. Must be those narcotics.”
Harry smiled. “I did warn you against them, sir.”
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Did I mention you're a genius? Did I?
Although, somewhere deep in my heart I'm quite annoyed at you for leaving us so loooong without an update.
But it's sort of -- only sort of, mind you! -- made up for the fact that you're a genius. Here, have a lemon drop.
OHDARN. I mean. I really do have lemon drops sitting on my desk here. They're only like fifty cents downtown for a tin of them. I didn't -mean- to be Dumbledore.
So, here, have a lemon drop. -shoves the whole tin at you-
Author's Response: LOL, thanks, Taryn...I think. :0) Glad to be called a genius, even a mean, lazy, slow-updating one...and I do like lemon drops, even if it does make you sound like Dumbledore. :0)
So glad you updated! I loved the tricks that Harry played on Snape. I hope he can catch up to Snape in points and hearing about the pranks with Theo's hair was amazing. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: :0) Yey!! I'm glad so glad you found it funny! My favorite parts of Harry Potter canon always involved the Weasley twins, so I was thrilled to discover that my Harry liked the same sort of pranks. :0)
A good chapter, again! My favourite part was the note that Ron and Harry exchanged in class and what Snape wrote upon it. "While you're passing notes, please advise Mr. Weasley that you both have detention with me this evening at 7:00." Well, "your" Snape definitely has a sense of humour! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the detention.
Author's Response: :0) Yey!! Glad you like!! And yeah, Snape definitely has a sense of humor, albeit a quiet one. Heehee, good thing, too, right? Poor Snape.
Brill as always, I'm really enjoying the buildup to explosions your going to have happen here. When "They" find out what happened to Harry it's not going to be pretty. Espically Severus and Hermione, they both lived in the muggle world and They KNOW what Harry's abuse would have ment. THe fact that his family got away with it for so long without intervention. Well, I can only say SOMEONE is going to pay for it. All it will take is for Hermione to explain that Harry could have had help but something stopped it..and those three boys are going to Lose it. Dood, Severus is going to have his hands full.
Author's Response: Lol, yeah. Funfunfunfunfunfunfun...
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