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Title: Call to Arms 16 May 2010 3:26 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Brave, brave Smidgen. Such a good friend to Harry she is. It took a great deal of courage for her to attack Nagini in defence of Harry. I do hope that Titania will be able to help Smidgen. Harry has already lost far too much in his young life and I would hate for him to lose her.

    I'm glad that the Faerie Queen, Titania, and her army came to the rescue. It's a really good thing that Harry had that brooch and was able to call for their help. Without Philip being there, I fear Harry would have never remembered though, so I am thankful that he managed to get a good hold on Harry before he was whisked away to the graveyard.

    All I can say about the Snape men and their fighting ability is..WOW! They are really amazing! To think..someday Harry might be just as impressive. I'm positive that Harry will want to be trained by his father and uncle.
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 11:43 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    let her live!!!!!!!!!!! Such a great story.. cool for the Fae to come and save the day...but where is the Order????
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, please let Smidgen live the life of the valiant! :)

    Poor Draco... I'd hoped he'd avoid being turned into a ferret this time but... Hugs to him!

    Excellent battle scene! I could see it so clearly in my mind's eye. I just loved it.

    Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Well done!
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please! Let the courageous Smidgen live!
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Please let her live. I can't tell you how much I hated the blood bath at the end of DH and I Love every author who has been able to come up with alternate means of ending the story without all of that death.

    I loved this chapter.

    V.
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 7:20 pm
Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LET SMIDGEN LIVE!!!!
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 7:18 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Talk about an intense and well-thought-out chapter.

    I simply loved the battle; the descriptions of everyone's actions was interesting and I especially loved when Sarai appeared. With the Fairy Queen, of all immortals, behind her! I could truly picture her charging forth on her beautiful steed to kick some Death Eaters' asses. I admit that I was shocked by the historical exchange between Titania and Voldemort.

    I think you should save Smidgen. Smidgen holds more merit and a bigger role than Philip does. To that extent... you need to kill the powerful vampire. Have a Dementor kiss him. Have someone poison him. But, Kathy, he needs to die. And not just for the fact that it would cause turmoil to your other characters.

    Think about it. I know you'll come up with a creative method. But I won't relent on this one, I'm sorry.

    This chapter and this story has been well worth the wait and I enjoyed every moment, especially the one's centered around my character. But the readers need to realize that he's not a permanent member of the family, that he belongs to no one and offers protection to those whom he believes deserve it. I think, though, he deserves a noble death.

    As for smidgen... there is more to her tale than a lot of readers know. Probably even more than you know. Give her a second chance. Sarai and Severus still need to get married and she should be a part of that.

    Kill Philip. Not Smidgen.

    I know this is a bit dark compared to my normal reviews but I wanted to get the point across.

    As always, I am eagerly looking forward to your next update.

    Lots and lots of love,

    Jewels.
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 6:58 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think Smidgen should live. This was a great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 5:39 pm
Reviewer: Teddybear (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I think that Smidgen should live!!!! I can't wait to read more.
Title: Call to Arms 15 May 2010 1:06 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh live live live! please let her live :D I had a little lump forming when she went still in Harrys' hands, his 1st real friend that has done so much for them all, she needs to live :)

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