| Title: Gauntlet
| 14 May 2010 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous)
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ahhh, mean cliffhanger! Great chapter though!!
| Title: Gauntlet
| 14 May 2010 7:43 am
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| Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous)
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By far the best version of the maze that I've read.
(Let him live!! I like imagining RP!)
Oooh exciting stuff! surely Uncle Phil will protect the boys now that he has gone with them? I never was a fan of dear ole Cedric dying just because he happened to be there lol, cant wait to find out what happens next chapter :)
I dunno! I just want to read the next chapter. You've done very well with this one. Kudos.
I have to wonder if all the 3rd tasks were of equal difficulty. Harry's path seemed to be far more difficult than it should have been.
I hope that Harry and Phil will be able to keep all of them alive. It would be terrible if they weren't able to protect themselves and Cedric with the prewarning that they have. Hopefully, they will be able to prevent what happened in Canon and keep Voldemort from returning the rest of the way.
I hope that they will be able to figure out that it was the fake Moody that attacked Draco. It would be terrible if the real one was punished for what happened in the hallway. I do hope that Draco will be alright.
Awesome as always. I definitely sympathize for poor Draco. I must admit Moody in your story seems to be worse than Umbridge. So great job. :)
In response to Cedric, my first response is let him live, but we don't really ever see him actually be a big help...so it's sort of iffy for me. However, Phil's with them so perhaps you could allow Cedric to live and give Phil a really cool scene. :)
| Title: Darkness Rising
| 10 May 2010 2:57 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Wow...I'm just so glad that Philip didn't die. Those two really need to die. Like...seriously. I hope Philip can get another sunstone though...that had to suck. No pun intended. I hope you don't have Draco get hurt bad...please?
Oh wow, busy chapter! I was afraid for Philip for a few minutes there, but I had faith that he would save Harry first lol cant wait to see how it all plays out next chapter :)
| Title: Darkness Rising
| 08 May 2010 12:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Well done. An Avenging Angel indeed. But I suspect that they will not make it in time to prevent Harry from making contact with the trophy. Oh dear, I hope Draco will be okay.
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