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Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 3:07 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww loved it! it was so good to see Harry beginning to open up a bit. I love how they are all there for him like that, cant wait to see more im loving where this is going and also liked Harry calling Sev Da here :)
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 10:51 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Not everyone does well speaking to a therapist. It is probably better, at least for now, that Harry talks to someone he knows and trusts rather than a stranger. Sometimes just talking to someone about your fears and feelings is enough to help. Eventually, perhaps, Harry will be ready to talk to Healer Sandrilas, but until then at least he is talking. It might actually be good if Severus begins to go to the Healer first. He also needs someone to speak to.

    Great chapter! I'm happy to hear that your arm is at 100% now!
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 8:20 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I like Harry calling Sev Da. I love the fact that Sev included Remus and Sirius to help harry. Great writing.
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 6:08 am
Reviewer: silverforest4 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice chapter, I love the marauders, Sirius is almost as great as Severus.
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 3:31 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter.
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 2:26 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter! I loved how all the characters have come across as very honest and true. Good job!
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 2:03 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter!

    I loved the scene between Remus and Snape. I'd love more of those scenes in the future. Hmmm...maybe Snape and Remus gang up to tease poor Sirius and Harry...

    I also loved the way Harry shock Severus by suddenly calling him Da. It was perfect. Not to mushy and not not to causual. Perfect!

    I'm glad your arm is better(that means more update right ;) )

    Excellent chapter and I can't wait to read the next!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, that's a brilliant idea! And it could happen too, when they get more comfortable with each other.  It'd be payback for all the times Siri pranked Sev.

    That's good because I was worried that it was too mushy.

    Yes, it does.

    Thanks so much for reading!

Title: The Problem Worsens 27 Mar 2010 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it was very good, and they did react in the correct way. A person who is suffering from depression and border-line addiction is reluctant to get help. Especially if one feels inadequate, for whatever reason. I think he should do so only if you feel that will fit into the story. Otherwise, Kudos on a job well done.
Title: The Problem Worsens 27 Mar 2010 1:05 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah the chapter was fine! :) I love a bit of angst hehe the idea of bringing in Sirius and Remus is brilliant, Sirius will know exactly how it feels to have had therapy and can let Harry know its not the weakness he thinks it is. I wouldnt mind Harry calling Sev dad at some point either if it worked into the right moment, it should fit in well if there is some angsty times ahead, cant wait :D
Title: The Problem Worsens 26 Mar 2010 6:52 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, I admit, I didn't really care for this story or its prequel to much before. Not because you aren't a good writer. Your amazing. I just don't really like creature fics. However I did skim through Broken Wings and just now skimmed through this story as well. And I have to say you never cease to amaze me. Your characters are very well written and your story lines are never dull. I especially like how you took away Dumbldore's magic and I hope there will soon be another chapter feature both he an Minerva at his home.

    Excellent story (as always)!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I hope you continue to read the rest of this, since the last part is focusing mainly on Severus and Harry's growing relationship as father and son and their Animagi forms are not as prominent here. You'll see more of Albus and Minerva again, I have another chapter coming up with them and more of their mishaps in Muggle world. I think this series is one of my best works, besides the Prince Manor series and Away in A Manger. Hope you continue to read it and let me know what you like about it.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I hope you continue to read the rest of this, since the last part is focusing mainly on Severus and Harry's growing relationship as father and son and their Animagi forms are not as prominent here. You'll see more of Albus and Minerva again, I have another chapter coming up with them and more of their mishaps in Muggle world. I think this series is one of my best works, besides the Prince Manor series and Away in A Manger. Hope you continue to read it and let me know what you like about it.

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