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Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 11:51 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Albus, the Muggle! Wow! m.
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 7:45 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a stubborn lot they are! I'm glad that they are all recovering so well. I can understand why the charm on the bathroom would freak Harry out; it would have been better if they had some kind of warning system instead that would call for assistance from a healer or something. (It was funny though!) I hope that Severus is about to talk to Harry about adopting him officially.

    Great chapter!
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 6:39 am
Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Adoption?!?!?!?!?

    Author's Response: Could be!
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 6:29 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    I got nothing on what Sev wants to talk about. Maybe Sasha coming over to England? Or perhaps what's up in the next school year? :D Anyways, I love this story! And I could just imagine Harry being ATTACKED BY A BATHROOM!!! XDD Amazing!
    ~Fern Rose
Title: Decoy 18 Nov 2009 6:11 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww such a beautiufl chapter! I loved how you made Hedwig he hero here. I was afraid and happy and relieved all at once. So many things! It was a brilliant chapter!
Title: Pursuit 18 Nov 2009 6:01 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! I love Harry & Meadowsweet and Sev's advice was really good. Harry needs to follow it. Darkmoon's encounter with the dryads was funny and I am really scared of the maledcorvae. Hope they can all get away.
Title: Herbology Lessons 18 Nov 2009 5:50 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you brought back Vince and Marietta and Vera! And I loved the Crabbe family. Vince's sisters were adorable.

    And Harry and Meadowsweet are perfect together! It was funny when Sev was lecturing them about paying attention. That was a really interesting lesson too. Sev is a great teacher.
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 5:47 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I cried and I laughed my ass off! I'm so glad Sev and Harry forgave Albus for his mistakes, forgiveness is really important and you capture that theme so well here.

    And the bath room, oh I just about died! But seriously, that would be a wonderful thing for elderly people who are handicapped who live alone or need assistance using the bathroom sine 87% of accidents and falls among the elderly happen in bathrooms in the home.

    But Harry was just too funny. "Help, Sev, the bathroom's stealing my pajamas!"

    LOL!

    I'm guessing Sev wishes to adopt Harry?
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 5:02 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg~!!! That was too funny. I just loved the part about the bathroom trying to take harry's pants down.

    OOh!! Snape's is going to adopt Harry, isn't he?

    Great chappie. Can't wait to see what Severus wants to talk to Harry about. Bet I'm right though!! I hope I am!
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Does he want to adopted Harry?

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