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Title: Victory's Price 15 Nov 2009 12:57 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh that was exciting! it was great to see Sasha again and im so glad that Harry is ok again :D

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! You'll see Sasha again eventually.
Title: Victory's Price 15 Nov 2009 5:13 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Beuatiful chapter! I loved it all! I feel bad for Albus but this was meant to be. Nothing come without cost. Keep writing and I will keep on reading.

    Author's Response: Aww thanks and that's so true.
Title: Victory's Price 15 Nov 2009 4:21 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a great chapter! It made me cry. I loved how Sasha and Severus rescued Harry from himself. And I can't wait to see what Albus has to say now that he no longer has magic. It's sad, but his sacrifice was a good one.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff sniff* Albus is a muggle now? I really didn't see that coming. Huh. Well, anyways, I liked Sasha coming into play and helping Harry back. I think in the next few chapters, Harry should demand the wolfen be freed and given rights. Or, well, something similar.

    Sasha really is one of my favorite characters. She courageous and knows what to do when the going gets tough.
    ~Fern Rose

    Author's Response:

    Yes he is but it was for a good cause.  Sasha will be back in a future chapter.

    That part will be coming up eventually, as soon as they can settle down in their home and get an appointment with Fudge,

Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 6:38 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Albus, the Muggle? Wow. The battle was nicely described. Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, he's kind of a Squib/Muggle  now.
Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 11:33 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that they were able to rescue Harry from the recesses of his own mind, helping him escape from his own insecurities. Love is a wondrous thing, isn't it?

    It will be very hard for Albus to adjust at first, I'm sure. Without his generous sacrifice, it is possible that all would have been lost, so while I'm sad that his magic is gone, I rejoice as well. I know that Harry and Severus will be key to helping him.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they will be key to helping him re-adjust.

    It really is and look how it saved Harry.

    Thanks as always!

Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 8:23 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I am so going to miss this series......I love the relationship you have developed between Harry and Severus. From hate to love.....everything woven into a loving family now. I love your writing. That sucks about Albus, but he did everything out of love.

    Author's Response: Yes he did and there will be several more chapters to this before this is over. So glad you liked the journey this has been going on. 
Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was really cool! I have heard about actual astral travel and you have used it quite well. I will definitely be reading this story to the end!

    Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!
Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 4:44 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    as always WONDERFUL

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Victory's Price 14 Nov 2009 3:14 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad that Harry is going to be okay, but it's very sad that such a powerful wizard is now a Muggle!


    That was really beautiful Snapegirl. I loved how caring Snape was with Harry and now Harry knows that Severus is really his father, in all the ways that are important.

    Author's Response:

    It is but Albus sacrificed himself willingly and so he was aware of what the cost might be.

    Yes, harry does know and Severus has finally unbent enough to tell him so.


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