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Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 13 Nov 2009 8:49 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa! What a chapter! I love the way you've blended canon with your original ideas, incorporating history and a bit of mythology along the way! I wasn't expecting Tom to actually find anything in the cave, beyond the setting itself, so you really surprised me-- and I LOVE surprises! I can't wait to see what happens next! /// One thing struck me early in the chapter, and I wasn't certain if you did it deliberately or by accident: when Trelawney is reading the tea leaves, I realized she was actually using DRY leaves, not the wet dregs after the tea had actually been drunk. I believed it was an error until I reconsidered, thinking maybe a seer looking for a generalized future wouldn't necessarily need to read "used" leaves, like she would if she were doing the reading for a specific person who had drunk from the teacup. Is that how you intended it? (I'd just never heard of reading dry tea leaves, so I thought I'd ask!)
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 11 Nov 2009 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I loved the battle scenes, they were very well choreographed. Can't wait for the update.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 5:20 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha! Tommy getting hit in the face was diffidently the climax.
    ~Fern Rose

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, it was.
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 4:10 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh! another 15-20 chapters?? thats fantastic! I cant wait to see where you will take the story now that mean ole Voldy is dead, so excited :D

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy where it goes.
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 10:44 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHHH!!! The CRUELTY! I'm glad that Dumbledore is okay and that Voldemort is dead at last, but now I have to worry about Harry! Hasn't he been through enough? xD I guess not!

    I will definitely stick through to the end; this story is too good to stop reading. I cannot wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I know I'm very mean! LOL!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 8:36 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You're right, didn't see that coming, but glad there is so much of the story left! When Harry was punching Tom, it reminded me of Sirius saying to Lucius, "Get away from my G-dson", PUNCH in Order of the Phoenix. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah it sure did!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 5:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    There you go old mouldy Voldie. Take that, and this, and that!!! Sev and Harry rule. Oh dear though. I just hope that Harry will be alright.

    Good chappie Snapegirl. Now write the next!! Please.. :)

    Author's Response:

    They do. Hooray!

    He will be eventually.

Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 3:13 am
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Arrrrggghhhh - I hate cliffieeeeesssss. Better now - I can wait - ok I can't. Please Please Please updte soon.

    That was an amazing chapter (better than chocolate)!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ooh I rate better than chcoclate??? My God!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 09 Nov 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! WOW! WOW! What an action-packed well written chapter! When I started it I honestly thought this was the end of the saga of our two heros......you just get better and better!

    Author's Response: No there's lots more to come! Thanks for reading!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 09 Nov 2009 9:01 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so glad you have decided to continue! I am very fond of this story and the characters in it and I am looking forward to the other chapters. (just don't create romance between Snape and Hermione!!)

    Bella in this chapter was a bit out of character though. I mean I am glad she is dead, but the first thing she would have done on seeing Sybill or Dumbledore would be to put an Avada kedavra.

    Author's Response:

    No, that I would never do.  Theirs is a strictly student/teacher relationship. 

    Maybe she would have if she were in her right mind, but she had just been blown through a wall and her head was injured, she had a concussion and wasn't really up to snuff, so that's why she didn't immediately cast a spell.  To me, the Killing Curse isn't something you can just cast immediately, even if you've done it before, it's a powerful piece of magic, and it takes concentration and focus.  Bella didn't have that after smashing through a wall, so she talked a bit, trying to regain her senses, and then the ceiling fell on her.

    Hope you like the next part and thanks for reading!


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