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Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 24 Oct 2009 5:57 am
Reviewer: EmmalynnLilliannaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Go Remus!! I so love this story. Usually, I only read stories that are finished because so many authors abandon their stories, but I've been addicted to your stories for so long now, and I can't tell you how glad I am that you update your stories. Please update again soon!! I can't wait to see what happens!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I'm honored and I have just updated again! Yay!
Title: Slytherin's Treasure 23 Oct 2009 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Beuatiful1 Loved how Harry chose his own punishment and then had to stick to it and how they solved the riddle and Hedwig helped. Such a great story! Harry will make a great dad with Snape's example.

    Author's Response: Ha! he sure will! Thanks for reading!
Title: Stormy Weather 23 Oct 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really stupid thing to do! Typical boy. I think Severus will ground him and make him clean the house. Love this story!

    Author's Response: Yes and that's a good punishment1 Thanks!
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 23 Oct 2009 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a chapter! That hellhound scared me to pieces! I was so glad that Harry and Sev killed it. And I feel bad for Severus remembering those kids that got burned to death. His life as a spy was so hard.

    Author's Response: Yeah a hellhound is scary.  Yes that's going to be a really sticky point for Severus and nobody knows just how hard that life has been until harry.
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 10:51 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice one. A perfect outcome.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I just updated finally!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo, I loved it1 Go Remus! Greyback got whomped good! And I loved Sev's speech about forgiving those who have returned to the light. Now I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of them! Go Vera!

    Author's Response: Yes Vera is one smart snake and Remus is the same! Severus really knows what he's talking about there and finally Sirius realized it.  I've updated so now you can read and find out!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved how Remus outsmarted Greyback! Go Remus!

    And Sirius thanking Vince's father was wonderful. Maybe our favourite dog animagus is finally growing up.

    And Vera made it! Now they just have to get the kids and Dumbledore out of durance vile.

    Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this and am looking ofrward to the next installment.

    Author's Response:

    Remus's moment was here and now, though he'll still be fighting in the upcoming battle, but this one was his. 

    Yes, Sirius is slowly but surely maturing. A war will do that to you.

    Yes and read the next chapter to see how they do it! I just posted it!

    Thanks for reading!

Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 7:49 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have really enjoyed reading this saga and cannot wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next chappie's up!
Title: Alerting the Order 23 Oct 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    In answer to your questions: Both? Yes, REmus and Greyback need ot have it out. Especially as Greyback was the one to turn Remus. Somebody needs to kill Bella. If it would be Sirius , it would have a kind of symmetry about it. And yes, I think that Seve and Harry ought to bond. They are good for each other as well as good to each other. They NEED each other.

    I love it that your Sybil isn't a useless half-wit BTW. Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, I think I know what I'm going to do about all of the battles.

    Sev and Harry have always needed each other, they just never wanted to admit it.

    No, Sybil will be playing an important role very soon. Just wait and see.

Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh yay Im soo glad that Greyback is dead, what a clever, if not gruesome, end to him! and yay to Vera finding Harry too! :D cant wait to see how they get to the hostages and what they will do to them when they do reach them!

    Author's Response: Yes I was soo happy to kill him off and allow Vera her own time to shine also.  Go and read the next part to find out what happens next!

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