Wow that was intense! And I feel really bad for Albus. Bellatrix and Lucius deserve to die. I loved how he talked to his sister and Lily in the garden too! Way cool!
I think he'll give himself to save the kids. It would be like him. Great talk between all the kids and the DE too!
Well I was wondering when they would come back into the picture! And here they are. the baddest of the bad. Poor kids I hope Dumbledore gets them out soon!
Aww I just love the Witherspoon family! Specially Jilly and Grace, they're so sweet and cute! Sev and Harry could really use a rest.
And I wouldn't mind a change of VP. Sometimes you need to change focus.
The Very Hungry Caterpillar is my fave!!
That ritual was amazing! I felt like I was there. And it really helped them both. I loved how they finally talked and forgave each other! So sweet!
He definitely needs to talk with Severus and I hope he can manage to do so. It's important that Sev forgives him and Harry knows it. I look forward to the next chapter.
First let me apologize for not reviewing sooner or for not leaving a review on the last couple of chapters.
I do love this story and I hope to see a sequel one day. However, I want more of your other stories first! I can not tell you enough times how truely gifted you are. Not only are your character well developed, but you manage to strike a perfect balance between description and dialoge in every scene.
Anyway, I'm sorry to see this story end and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.
*side note* If you do write a sequel a nice little Christmas scene between Sev, Harry, Albus, and maybe Minerva would be nice. And funny. ;)
A wonderful end to a wonderful story! I have enjoyed the journey immensely.
I do hope that you will continue this tale at least one more time. There are things we still want to know...how will Harry handle Ginny's infatuation with him? Will Severus and Thea get back together?
| Title: Dawn Flight
| 04 May 2010 12:44 am
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This was a fabulous story and I'm really really upset because it's done! Please post a sequel ASAP, I'm having withdrawal, LOL!
| Title: Privet Drive, Once More
| 04 May 2010 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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This whole chapter was great! I loved how the Dursleys were handled and everything. Severus was awesome and so was Harry.
Bravo!! Such a great chapter!
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