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Title: Circle of Friends 29 Apr 2010 12:49 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ginny can be jealous all she wants; Harry loves Meadowsweet and nothing she does will change that fact. I hope that she won't cause too many difficulties for the couple when the school year starts.

    Jilly really is a sweetheart. I do hope that Sirius won't tease Severus too much. :D

    Part one of Harry's party was wonderful and I cannot wait to read the rest!
Title: Circle of Friends 28 Apr 2010 9:29 pm
Reviewer: natholius (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome! great chapter. i really like how you started a new plot line at the end there; it should be interesting to follow it.
Title: Circle of Friends 28 Apr 2010 7:36 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, wonder if Paul caught the slip of Darkmoon's mention of magic and portkey. Maybe Darkmoon will come to the school as well to keep an eye on Ginny.
Title: Circle of Friends 28 Apr 2010 7:31 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it cant wait for the next bit :)
Title: Circle of Friends 28 Apr 2010 5:14 pm
Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ginny better sit down before sasha throws her down. cuz she don't stand a chance against Meadowsweet!
Title: Past Regrets 26 Apr 2010 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd say a book or something from Hermione. Not sure about the rest. Btw, Kudos on a job well done. Nice chapter.
Title: Past Regrets 23 Apr 2010 2:32 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Severus, he has had to give up so much for the war to atone for his one mistake, it was good to see the history with Thea though :)
Title: Past Regrets 23 Apr 2010 1:24 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter, though after the last not much can compete. Did I mention you're an amazing writer?

    As for presents:
    Video Games
    Movies (Maybe from Hermione. That could make it more interesting)
    Books (Magical mystery novels?)
    A magical way to communicate with Meadowsweet. (Like the mirror or something similiar)

    Thats all I can think of hope someone else gives you better ideas.

    Awesome chapter!
Title: Past Regrets 22 Apr 2010 10:50 pm
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for this chapter, it should help me to better understand when Thea is there ^_^

    For the presents : some books, some sweets, some things people made themselves (like meadowsweet)... I hope it helps a little ^_^ Whatever you chose, i'm sure it will be good ;-)
Title: Past Regrets 22 Apr 2010 9:59 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish that Severus could have told Thea so much more or could have perhaps asked her to come with him. He shouldn't have had to give up love to remain free. It's sad that he was trapped by the circumstances of his past. I hope that Thea will give him another chance when they meet again.

    Great chapter! As to the gifts request: Hermione would probaby get him something practical; Ron and Ginny, candy of some sort; Paul, something that they both would appreciate (like a new game?), Meadowsweet, probably something hand-made by her. I'm not sure on the others.

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