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Title: So Emotional 31 Dec 2010 2:47 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwwwwwwww lupin god i love him why do all the characters i love have to die in canon
Title: Revelations 31 Dec 2010 2:28 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    “I’ll flay you alive if you even think about it, Potter,” : awww so Draco
    awesome job with lupin and Sev they would do well together that is true well i guess you can say they are together in the afterlife
Title: Uninvited 30 Dec 2010 11:59 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww Harry poor him so much hardship and now this
Title: Sticks and Stones 23 Dec 2010 6:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, so Sev and Remus are going to have another child? interesting.

    Oh Harry, you are such a Gryffie, aren't you?

    Great job, can't wait for more. Glad that Sev is going to be okay.
Title: And So It Begins... 02 Aug 2010 7:56 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Harry did the right thing when he chose to tell his parents and boyfriend what was told to him by Dumbledore. The old man was wrong to ask Harry to keep this from them and I have to wonder why he asked him to in the first place. Harry is going to need all the help he can get and only telling Hermione and Ron would severely limit his resources...

    I really love that Moreau was caught because he knocked HIMSELF out. The potion has been eliminated and the maker of it is neutralized, which is a good thing.

    I hope that they will be able to bring Lucius around eventually. He needs to choose a side. Harry is right about how Voldemort thinks and really, Lucius was a Deatheater for HOW long? You would thing that he would know it to be true and join the Order already. At least that way he would be taking an active role in his quest to keep his son safe.
Title: And So It Begins... 29 Jul 2010 2:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Does that mean that there is "another" cliffie coming up?! :O


    I'm glad that Harry eventually told his Dad, Remus, and Draco Harry is going to need all the support that he can get.

    I'm worried that something is going to go wrong.

    Great chappie of course, and I simply can't wait for the next one.
Title: Unspeakable Plans 13 Jul 2010 4:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very powerful, briliant chapter. You never disappoint me; especially now that we get loads more of this wonderful story.

    I'm not sure whether to trust Lucius or not. I hope that he doesn't disappoint Draco though. For his sake, I hope that Lucius is sincere.

    I don't blame Harry for losing it with Dumbles, but I also felt sorry for him too.

    Oh, I can't wait till the next chapter, which I hope will be really really really really soon! :)
Title: Unspeakable Plans 12 Jul 2010 9:12 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it when Harry called the headmaster Albus, respect is earned, Albus needs to remember that. Great chapter.
Title: Decay 22 Jun 2010 10:29 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry has lost so much in his young life and now he learns that the man he looks on as a mentor is dying. Terrible. How much more must the poor child suffer?

    I hope that the questioning of Lucius bears fruit. I know that Severus is enraged right now, but hopefully his usual reason will take control soon and he will see the usefulness of keeping Lucius alive and under the thumb of the Order.
Title: These Dreams: Part 2 22 Jun 2010 7:53 pm
Reviewer: Anon #37 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not bad, although you're using a lot of words incorrectly. Some examples:

    * gotten passed me => gotten past me
    * masochistic => sadistic
    * luscious => you probably mean Lustrous

    These minor errors really distract the reader from your writing. A beta would help you to catch such errors.

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