Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 15 Oct 2009 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I thought this opening dialogue here was heartbreaking! Nicely done, but so sad. Particularly loved the "I'd do anything" line there. I'd break there too, were I Harry. You are tying nice parallels between Harry and Severus this whole story so far. I've mentioned this many times throughout, but you do a great job with doing it. History repeats itself, even in the WIzarding World, it seems. HAHA! Love how he "convinced" Harry to help him with potion-making! Poor Harry, thinking he's constantly going to be punished and that it's all a good dream. Is it just the fact that he's in a potions lab? I love that he's determined to have Harry at least PASS potions! Aw, I actually, "aww"'d out loud at Snape saying, "He's one of us, Lily, he's one of us."

    Typo Alerts: "It was an eye opening revelation to make since Harry had been use to the other wizard always..." Add a "d" to "use."

    Author's Response:

    ^-^ Yay! So good to hear from you again RK! Hope you're feeling better and all and things are going well for you. (I didn't even realize that there was something wrong until I saw another review you got *hangs head in shame*) But let us not dwell on bad thing; on with the review!!

    I'm so glad that you like the parallels between Harry and Sev. I don't know why, but stuff like that just facinates me. And HA! yeah, the potion-making part I randomly thought of and decided that it NEEDED to be put in there since things were so angsty in the beginning...and things aren't going to always be so light-hearted towards the end...dun dun duuuuuunnnnn (that's dramatic music, by the way ^-^) And I'm so happy I got an "aww!!!" out of you. That line I just threw in there too! Thanks for another lovely review, and I'm off to your others!

Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 15 Oct 2009 12:06 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    -headdesk- Now that's just downright cruel to leave it there.

    I wanted top mention, once again how much I love the Snape-as-a-seer twist. I can't wait to see where this fic goes!

    Author's Response:

    Muhahaha!! I love being dramatically evil!! But I'm glad you're enjoying this and Severus being a seer. ^-^ And just hold on a bit and the next chapters on the way! Have a chocolate frog while you wait! Thanks again for the review!!

Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Harry in Slytherin. Well...at least he'll be able to see Severus whenever he wants.

    The only problem I forsee, is that he is going to be surrounded by Slytherins who will be out for his blood. But then again, Severus can keep an eye on him now.

    Great chappie Ivy, and yes I do feel better now, thanks!

    Author's Response: Good! Glad you're having a better day! ^-^ And yep, Harry's a Slytherin...a Slytherin that's hated by ALL the other Slytherin...but yeah, Severus can be there for him, in a way. So thanks for another wonderful review, Pandora, and have a chocolate frog!
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 4:51 pm
Reviewer: HPFan10 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! I'm really enjoying this story. The sorting hat part was great...I can't wait to see everyone's reactions!

    Author's Response: Why, hello! I'm glad you liked it so far! And Thanks for the review! Care for a chocolate frog? :D
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    O_O How could you?! Such an evil evil evil cliffhanger!! WHHHHYYY?!?!?! Great chapter! Long time reader, first time reviewer. A+++++++ Pleeeeaaase update soon! I'm going to go crazy after that ending! *starts stalking you for a new chapter* ._.

    Author's Response: HA! Oh, Vulpixer, you literally made me laugh out loud! Thanks for sticking with me and it's about time you started to review!! XD But thanks so much, and I'll update soon. I've already got the next chappie planned out. Wanna chocolate frog?
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 2:33 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL Wonderful. Very tricksy indeed.

    BTW, I really liked the fact that the debate on the train about Snape was oh-so-very similar to the debates going on before and after the release of Book 7. Friend or Foe?

    “So, Professor Snape is good... I knew the Headmaster couldn’t be fooled by him if Professor Snape was a bad man.”

    “Well Dumbledore did let Quirrell into the school,” And on and on and back and forth. :-D

    Author's Response: :D Yay! Glad you caught it, and I'm so glad you liked it!...even if I was being tricksy (I love that word!) Thanks for another awesome review, and would you like a chocolate frog?
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 2:25 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy what a cliffy! This will give Severus the reason to stay close to his son. There's no way Dumbledore would put Harry in the dorm with all those little snakes.

    Author's Response: ...you'd be surprised... but it does give reason for Severus to stay close. Thanks for another review, Phoenix1! Care for a chocolate frog?
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 1:24 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are really evil.

    Author's Response: XD Thank you! And thanks for a review. Chocolate frog?
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 1:18 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep! You are Evil! Poor Harry, Poor Sev--not that they are in the same house, but that they now have to worry about Harry in Slytherin--And we were worried about Sev!

    V.

    Author's Response: XD I love being evil! XD And yes, Harry's going to have a time, just like Snape, but Don't Panic! (blatant Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy quote) Thanks for another review, V! Have a frog!
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 1:13 pm
Reviewer: Chu (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! I squealed when I read that ending!
    Oh man, now Harry's got to deal with all the Slytherins, this should be fun. Can't wait for the next chapter *squeal*

    Author's Response: :D Thanks Chu! Glad you're enjoying it so much! And I'm glad you liked the end. Here's a chocolate frog!

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