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Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 10 Oct 2009 12:19 am
Reviewer: hacklebolt (Signed) [Report This]
    *Munches on apple dumpling* great like how Severin/Peter is building a relationship with his father.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!...oh and the chapter too ;)
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 05 Oct 2009 2:26 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    :D Harry is just so unsure of himself, good thing Severus has it under control.

    Author's Response: lol Snape always has it under control...well, he things he does. lol Thanks for reviewing!! Have an apple dumpling!
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 05 Oct 2009 12:38 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, they are so sweet! I love how you've brought the chapter nicely round from depression at the beginning to such a great uplifting note at the end - thanks for writing!

    Author's Response: You are very welcome! But I think I should be thanking you for the great review! (I always LOVE these things XD ) And I'm glad it turned out the way I'd wanted it to. I thought some nice drama and then some fluff. Have an apple dumpling!
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 04 Oct 2009 12:15 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww! What a sweet chapter! I just love the end! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter's on the way, so grab an apple dumpling and enjoy it as you wait! ^-^
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 03 Oct 2009 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, apple dumplings? Yum yum.

    You deserve it. Great chapter Ivy.
    I just love how they are bonding and SEverus is trying to control his temper.

    I especially love the ending when Severus realises that Harry is good at potions.

    Great job as usual Ivy. I loved the bonding. Squeeee...

    Want more...

    Author's Response: LOL Glad you're enjoying the apple dumpling...and the chapter of course! ^-^ And don't worry, I've already started the next chapter, so be a bit patient and enjoy the apple dumpling. (I LOVE them so MUCH!!) Thanks for another review!
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 03 Oct 2009 8:43 pm
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanted to comment that this entire chapter was quite sweet... it made me smile.

    Author's Response: Very glad to hear it! So glad that you liked it! Have an apple dumpling while you wait for the next ^-^
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 03 Oct 2009 7:56 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    For such a turbulant beginning, this was a wonderfully warm ending for the chapter. At what point will Sev realize that small heart-felt compliments mean the world to Harry. Even more so than big jestures (that our poor boy realy doesn't know how to take or understand.)

    Lovely! looking forward to your next update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! ^-^  While Sev himself likes the little things, he doesn't have to mindset to realize the little things he does all the time to make others happy. But I'm glad you liked it! Have an apple dumpling while you wait for the next update! :D 
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 03 Oct 2009 5:06 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Yum-yum! Apple dumplings. Thanks.

    Thanks for the update, I really like the way you are molding Snape and Harry into their new roles without changing their characteristics. Especially Snape's reaction to the thought of having to give Harry up. His trying so hard to hide his fear and pain of that very thought brought tears to my eyes.

    Thanks again for sharing your story with us.

    A few small edits need to be done - there were two times when you used the word revile (abuse or malign) instead of reveal (uncover or make known)
    "but they wait for the day when they can revile to everyone" and "He had never been good at reviling his true emotions" Of course, the funny part of this is that I imagine that Snape is actually very good at reviling his true feelings. :-D

    Plus, "Harry watched his father in jealous aw" should be awe instead. And lastly, in the stirring instructions, "then still twelve times" should, of course, be stir.

    Author's Response: OPP!! Sorry about that. Those are really silly mistakes *hangs head in shame* I'll go fix them. Thanks for telling me!! And thanks for the review! Enjoy your dumpling! :D
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 03 Oct 2009 3:46 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Harry reacted much as I expected he would upon hearing about his death. I'm very curious about what Harry and Severus might come up with to convince the Order otherwise. Then again, maybe Dumbledore will come to his senses too; I think that Snape has greatly underestimated Ron and Hermione though. My money is on them figuring it out first.

    Update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: XD Yeah, Sev never really trusts kids too much does he? And I'm glad that you liked this chapter. I revised some of it, so I'm glad it came out pretty good. And I'll write as soon as I can. Thanks for the review! Have an apple dumpling! :)
Title: Chapter 28: Hidden Truths 03 Oct 2009 8:48 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    A very cute chapter, Ivy. There was a bit of angst with Harry dealing with his "death" and a bit of fluff and happiness with the Potions lessons.

    I love Sev's last line. It really was a great end to a chapter. I'm glad Severus and Harry are beginning to really start acting like father and son.

    As always, I can't wait for the next update. I'm anxious to see what happens when Harry and Sev return to Hogwarts. There are so many ways you could take that, and I can't wait to see which way you choose. ;)

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks Ella! Glad you liked it. I thought that in the end the two could use a pick-me-up after what happened. And yes! Hogwarts is coming up next! I'm so excited, because this is when the story REALLY gets moving, and I can't wait to write it! It's been stuck in my head for a long time now. But thanks again for the review, and have an apple dumpling! (they're soooo good!) :D

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