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Reviews For Where Once Was Light
Author's Response: lol I prefer to go book & movie shopping personally, but clothe shopping's okay with me every once and a while. But thanks for the nice review, I'm glad you enjoyed it! For you I will sing "Vedrai Carino" from Mozart's opera Don Giovanni. Thanks again! :)
fun fun clothes shopping! I rather watch others clothes shopping cause when I do it takes HOURS! >_> I'm very indecisive, I try a lot on and in the end walk out with nothing lol! Author's Response: lol ^-^ I'm pretty pick when shopping and usually know what I want when I see it, or else I won't bother, but there's nothing wrong with taking your time...unless you're on a time scheduel. Thanks for the nice review, and I hope to be writing sooner (and better really) chapters in the future! For you, I sing "The Water is Wide" a pretty English folk song. Thanks again! :)
I'm so happy that Harry and Severus are finally getting to know each other, and that they've forgiven each other. Good luck with your geography Ivy. we missed you! Author's Response: For you my dear Pandora, I will sing "To the Sky" a pretty southern folk song. And I'm glad you liked the chapter. Not my best, I admit, but this week's been particularly mean for some reason or other. I have an incompetent geography teacher who is ruining my love of geography! But thanks, I'm glad I was missed. And hopefully I can be quicker to update. :)
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Author's Response: Me too, me too!!! Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!! :D
Severus's rationalizing of how he felt about Lily and Harry/Severin was an interesting introspective thing there. Wish Harry would have told him why he objected to Peter so much. Maybe then they wouldn't have totally had a stand-off. The Weasley scene was interesting. Ron will have a fit when the owl comes back with Harry's letter. Oh dear. And are you going to continue this all through the fourth book timeline? The Quidditch World Cup and all that? That would be interesting to see your skewed timeline into that... Typo Alerts: "fourteen year old feel at a distinct disadvantage form the adult wizard." "form" should be "from." "It was lucky for him that he had remember this place,..." Should be "remembered." "...Mrs. Cadogan, I shall conceder your advice,...”" It should be spelled "consider." "How dare that child be so ungratefully, turning his back..." Change "ingratefully" to "ungrateful." [same paragraph] "...to keep him away from abusive relative?" "relative" to "relatives." "...trickle through him, slowly at first, something icy, something fridge, before it..." Do you mean "frigid?" "Merlin, his own childhood could not be counted on to drawl out any useful information..." I believe the phrase is "draw out" not "drawl out." "All he had showed was anger, bitterness..." Change "showed" to "shown." "...the situation became clear, all the vales had been torn away." Should be "veils." And don't fear the professors. I myself have some...how shall I say?...unique...professors as well this term. Author's Response: Yeah, the Colonel never really did have a first name, but I like Christopher a lot better than some of the other names people have given him, such as *grimaces* James *shutters* And poor Sev and Harry see that they're not getting on too well now that they're by themselves. How sad. And YES! This is going to carry out through the school year, because that's the part I've had planned for EVER!! That's that part that I REALLY want to see people's thoughts on *grin* But thanks for the review, it helps make things go better. I'll really try to catch up on your story. I've just had SO much worthless reading to do in some of my classes *groan* It's common sense that you have to read or else you forget about it because it's common sense. Does that make sense? Oh well. THANKS for the review!! :)
I cant wait for the next one thanks for updating:) Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry again about not updating sooner, but with school and stupid computer issues *mutters* it's been crazy. Thanks again for a nice review!!
Author's Response: YAY!! I'm glad you like it so much! I never realy like Dubly unless someone makes him a complete idiot. XD So I'm really glad that there are other people out there that feel the same as me. Thanks for the awesome reveiw!! I hope you keep reading!
Oh yes! Gummy smiles. Sweet and yummy. Sorry about your computer Ivy. If it's any consolation, that was a wonderful chapter, so full of emotion. We really got to see how Severus is at a loss on how to behave as a father, and his insecurities. Well done, and I can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: Yay! Thank you. I'm gladyou like to see how the potions master ticks. XD And yes, my computer's beig evil, but I think I'm going to get it all taken care of soon. Thanks for the review, I always love hearing from you! (hey, that rhymed!) :D
update soon Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try!! :) |
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