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Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Doewke (Signed) [Report This]
    ABFAB!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! Every moment of it. you've nicely explained the process of Severus' feelings. And then at the end where Ron sets out to write a letter to Harry....Wow what a cliffhanger btw!! Congrats!!

    Author's Response: Wow 0.o Thanks very much!! That just made my mornng! I'm going to give you ffty points for being far too generous  I'm sure. :) I'm really glad you liked the way I explaned Sev's thought process. That makes me happy and thanks for liking the cliffie. :D Have some smilies! XD
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter, the slow build of Harry and Severus's relationship is really enjoyable, the tears the regret etc. Keep up the great work and don't mind the grouchy profs they spend too long with there head in a book. Post soon

    Author's Response: :D Thanks for the lovely review!! It means a lot! Have some smilies!! XD
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 11:34 am
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Peter as Wormtail? I don't like that name either.

    Author's Response: Yeah, no one likes the name because Wormtail ruined it. Thanks for a review!!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 9:40 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    [ “And who’s Peter then, love?”
    “My son,” he blurted out, not really thinking everything through much, just wanting to cover his mistake. ]

    HAHA Niiiiice save Sev :)
    You've given us the reason for Peter!

    However it is a bit unreasonable on both sides in Harry and Sev's attitude because Harry wanting a new name and Sev not telling him his mistake.

    I don't mean your writing or idea is unreasonable I mean the characters are being that way! >_> I really need to work on my explanations better!

    I have an idea you don't even have to think about it I just feel like typing it you can skip if you'd like I wouldn't mind. You can say reason why Sev cursed at Peter is because Harry-Peter changed his name with out Sev's consent? haha yeah random though but it's kind of silly I think? Maybe :P

    Big thanks to your Mr. Ryan! He's our hero!

    What are Smilies? Oh...lol still haven't heard of them but if they're gummies then I definitely won't say no.
    I will give you in return a bright childish smile on my face and cup my hands together with them in front of me waiting for candy. :D

    Author's Response: Yay candy!! And yes, both characters were unreasonable. That's actually what I was going for. Maybe it will make better sense later? You'll have to tell me later. Glad you liked Sev's safe too. That Mrs. Cadogan *shakes head* She doesn't know when not to snoop. But glad you liked it and thanks for another review!!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 8:40 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing as always! I understand computer trouble, I've had my own share of it recently. Can't wait to see what's next! Poor Harry, I hope they can work something out about the name. And I still hope they can find out Harry isn't dead soon. It'll destroy Ron and Hermione.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Glad you liked it! And yes, computers are both amazing and torturous devices. *sigh* But thanks for the nice review!!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 29 Aug 2009 6:22 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    "The Englishman who went up a hill but came down a mountain" or something like that. It was a about a hill in Wales that was just a few feet short of being a mountain so the townspeople carry dirt up to the top to make it a mountain. Of course, I could be totally wrong about this.

    Does this take place between the third and fourth Hogwarts year?

    Author's Response: Yes, it is between the third and fourth year. Thanks for the review and the neat little story thingy!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 26 Aug 2009 1:18 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how well you described the change in Harry's appearance. Good chapter overall. :-)

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks very much!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 26 Aug 2009 1:00 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was awesome, I am glad that Harry is "himself". Mrs. Cadogan sounds like a very nice land lady. I like the made up names of Christopher and Peter. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the complement! Love those! ^^ And I'm glad you also like Mrs. Cadogan. I hope she'll be fun. I'll try to update as soon as I can, so have some candy while you wait. Thanks again!!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 24 Aug 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what the scar of his humor from Minerva was...*giggle* Also, like the thought that the only nice clothes Snape owned inhis childhood were also from his school wardrobe. Poor Snape. Poor Harry. The similarities between the two is sometmes painful. (I'm sure it is for Severus, too.) Ha! Harry viewing his chores list like an assignment. He would think like that. ANother point I thoroughly that was interesting was how Snape's defense mechanism is his temper to cover up anything sentimental. Nice. I like your description of Harry's physical change after the spell. It was really effectively described.

    OMG! You did not! You have his alias as Brandon! (As in after the very smexy, swoon-worthy Colonel Christopher Brandon played by Alan Rickman? *swoons*) Oh no! He called him Peter! No wonder why Harry/Severin would flinch, thinking about Peter Pettigrew was he? *pukes* I hate Pettigrew (Still can't figure out how he was even James/Sirius/Remus/Lily's friend, I really can't...) HAHA! "She was really no worse than Dumbledore!"

    Typo Alerts: "Here, Harry found himself becoming very nerves." Change "nerves" to "nervous." "...burned for days after the Potions Master had made he scrub out cauldrons..." Change "he" to "him." "There was a part of him that wanted to run away and hid." Add an "e" to "hid." "...mix between the Snape side and the Evan side." Change "Evan" to "Evans." "Shaking his head is shock, Harry found..." Should read, "...head in shock..." "“You must let me show you around. “Now, now, Mr. Brandon,..." Remove the quotation mark before, "Now, now..."

    Author's Response:

    Ah yes, my most beloved Colonel Brandon. I couldn't help it really, it just seemed the perfect alias for our dear Potions Master. *giggle* I had a copy of Sense and Sensibility staring me in the face as I was typing, so I really couldn't help myself. And yes, Peter, everyone's been giving me heck for the name, but just hold on and you'll understand why next chapter. (really didn't think it'd get that much attention actually) But thanks for another review!

    Now, along with the candy, the special prize is you get your own copy of either Edward or the Colonel Brandon. (don't think too hard) I know what I'd choose. ^-^ Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 24: Change 24 Aug 2009 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter. I think your film is Sense and Sensibility (the name Brandon. Alan Rickman played Col. Brandon) but that came out in 1995. Post soon

    Author's Response: IT came out in '95? Really? I thought for sure it was '94. *shrug* Still a fantastic book/movie. Yay Colonel Brandon! So, you can have Edward or the Colonel. Not too hard a choice (at least for me) Thanks for the review- have some candy! ^^

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