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Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 16 Aug 2009 1:55 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really don't like sories when Malfoy lives with Harry. I don't like Malfoys at all.

    Author's Response: Sorry to hear that, but please don't stop reading my story. *begs* If it'll make you feel any better, I can honestly say Draco won't be living with Sev any time soon.Have a smile though! :D
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 16 Aug 2009 8:20 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Conflicted Draco is good. I hope he forgives Sev because he'll need him if he decides to turn his back for sure on being a Death Eater.

    You've made Narcissa interesting when most write her off as a neglectful trophy wife. She's smart and cunning in this, a perfect Slytherin. Good job.

    Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked her. I always thought she'd have to be smarter than everyone else made her out to be, or else why would she have been in Slytherin? Thanks for the review!! Have a smile! :D
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 16 Aug 2009 7:21 am
Reviewer: salazarschild (Signed) [Report This]
    1 i dont think you could disappoint me. you are a great writer and i love your story. 2 ummm can you help me i think i died from happiness a bit earlier in the chapter. ^^' to much excitement sorry

    Author's Response: lol I'll call 911! Now, can you tell me 1. where you are, and 2...what's their number again? Yeah, sorry, lame joke. But I'm all excited that you liked this chapter. You get a big ol' smile! :D
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 16 Aug 2009 5:46 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'll take that wonderful happy sunshine "Ivy" smile!

    Brilliant chapter! The plot thickens...

    Poor Draco, Poor Narcissa. Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter!

    I'm worried for Severus though. How's he going to go back to Hogwarts now. Oh dear! Can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response: Yay! You always get lots of Ivy smiles! Because you always make me happy! ^^ Thanks again for the review, and don't worry, things will take care of themselves...maybe...*wink* ;)
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 11:07 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I like hugs so I'll review... even if you weren't hugging people... by the way, the jello was yummy. :) Wow what a chapter.... and sheesh what a name Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch
    I seriously thought you made that up but since you been there, then I have to believe you. I can't wait until everybody knows that Harry is Severus's son. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: lol With a name like  Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch you'd think it was made up! But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again for the review, and I'm glad you like jello and hugs! ^^
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have promise.

    Although you write well, it is a little confusing when you jump from one year to another. While I understand that this is fan fiction, and I rather enjoy the past history, I found that Petunia Dursley acted rather forgiving all too soon after discovering Severus within her house. Your conflict in the past is wonderful, especially between Severus and Vernon but I haven't noticed much tension between Harry and Severus.

    Please bear with me; this is not a flame and I am not trying to discourage your writing. You are truly doing a remarkable job and it's enjoyable; these are simply a few tips.

    Curiously, have you read Heir to Prince Manor by Snapegirl?

    Keep writing, my dear. It is the only way any of us can improve our skills.

    Respectfully yours,

    Lady Julie Snape.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know if I've read Prince Manor, but I'll check it out. Maybe I have in the past. I know I've read Dark Angel, or it was something like that. And I see your points. I was kinda thinking  along the same lines, but I'll work on it. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Llan.... - that was good. Harry is definetely safer if headmaster doesn't know that he is alive.

    Author's Response: lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 3:03 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    lol, what a name! "._."

    Author's Response: XD I liked it too! Thanks for the review!! *hugs*
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Dumbledore never finds out and leaves Harry and Severus alone.

    Author's Response: Don't fret! I have a PLAN!! Yeah, that was weird. But thanks for the review! You get a hug!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 1:44 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter, I plan to enjoy the Dumbledore guilt trip (its his own fault really) Keep up the great work and post soon

    Author's Response: lol Thanks! I'll try to update really soon! *hugs*

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