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Title: A Sleeping Dragon 08 May 2010 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, I've finally caught up, and this chapter was definitely worth the wait (though of course it's hard to wait!).

    I felt so bad for Harry being in such pain, but I'm happy that Severus was able to help him. Harry hasn't handled the news (of Severus being his father) well at all, has he? But I also can't help but think that part of that is because his nerves are already stretched to the breaking point with the cancer, and then being in pain and being scared and worried...he's just not in the best shape physically or mentally right now.

    But hopefully he will see that Severus was trying to protect him and do what was best, and he still is.

    Severus gets lots of points here for being so kind and patient and understanding. He's a wonderful dad and Harry is lucky to have him.

    Oh, and I'm looking forward to Ron's visit. I hope that someone will prepare Ron ahead of time and that he'll come through for Harry. If Ron and Hermione can come to grips with the cancer and be strong for Harry, I think their companionship and support would be a very good thing for Harry now.

    And loved the grades and how Severus reassured Harry that he didn't have to be an Auror. I always felt that Harry would have enjoyed another career more. I think at the time he wanted to be as prepared as possible to face Voldemort, and Auror training sounded fun and exciting, and he really wasn't interested in the other careers that were mentioned, so he settled on being an Auror. But I always thought that once the war was over and he wasn't in danger, and he was a bit older and more mature, that Harry would have realized that he really didn't enjoy all the confrontations and the danger, and that he might re-think that decision.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yay, you've caught up! Though now you'll have to wait like everyone else, so I guess it's a bit of a double edged sword. 

    You're right that part of the reason Harry isn't handling the news well is because of all the other stressors in his life, but he was only told that morning, so he's still in shock a bit, I think. He doesn't know what to think or even what's he thinking. With a little time, he'll start to come around. If Severus keeps showing he cares, Harry will start to recognize it. I think a bit changing point will be when Severus is able to brew the memory restorative draught and regain his memories, so he's able to better explain things to Harry.

    I'm sure Severus won't allow Ron in without at least trying to prepare him. ;)

    I agree that Harry just kinda fell into his career as an Auror. I have some ideas for him, but we'll see if he changes his mind by the time I get there. Thanks!

    PS: Congratulations on being the 500th review!  

Title: A Sleeping Dragon 06 May 2010 9:28 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for updating great chapter very sensitive writing about their problems

    Author's Response: Thank you! It's a delicate balance to treat all the issues just right. I'm glad to hear it's well received. 
Title: A Sleeping Dragon 05 May 2010 2:44 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, great chapter as usual! I always get a thrill of pleasure when I see that you've updated.

    Severus is excercising enormous patience with Harry. Poor kid, being in so much pain though.

    Ooh, I'm glad that Harry will see Ron and Hermione soon.

    LOL! Severus is really becoming a true Dad, isn't he? Telling Harry that he expects good grades from him.

    Oh, and Harry's real name is not Snape? But Prince? Oh interesting.


    Great chappie as usual!! I want more though! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Sev's patience is certainly being tested, and he's passing quite well so far. I think it's part of him really becoming a dad though I'm sure he can still be scary and imposing when Harry does something really bad. Harry's full name is mentioned earlier in the story. I believe it's chapter 19, when Sev visits WCS. There's a little background there, but a lot more will be revealed coming up very soon. 
Title: A Sleeping Dragon 05 May 2010 1:54 am
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought I would do this in a separate review cos I ramble sometimes ^^ So I was reading Sproutchild's awesome Antonomasia and kind of got carried away while at work with making a banner for it, and then I got more carried away and did the same for yours ^^. I would have stopped, but I enjoy it way too much.

    I remember you wrote in your A/N somewhere that you liked the idea of Orlando Bloom as Severus, over Alan Rickman. And then I totally found a picture that I was like 'No Way! It's Snape!' (Guess which one in the banner ^^). I kind of agreed, Rickman is too old to play a 37 year old, though he is wonderful. I always picture Ioan Gruffudd or Sean Bean when I think of Severus, but Orlando Bloom is definitely the best image to work with ^^ So, rambling over, the link below should work.
    If it asks for a password, it should be 'tacloban'.

    http://s822.photobucket.com/albums/zz143/georgee_girl3/Portfolio/Posters/?action=view¤t=AleaIactaEst.jpg

    You don't have to do anything with it, I just thought I would show you since it is completed based on your fic ^^ Do with it whatever you want

    Fabsx

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry about rambling. They're usually insightful when talking about a story. ;) I, too, love sproutchild's Antonomasia. 

    Ha, that's too funny that you saw a pic of Orlando and your first thought was that's it's Snape. I always think of the Kingdom of Heaven era Orlando as Snape with the slightly more muscular frame and straight, longer hair. Thanks for the pic/banner. I'll probably link it in my ff.net profile if that's alright with you? I have a little collection going there. Well, I will when I update my profile. lol. After my little vacation, I plan to get all the little things done I've been putting off. Thanks again! 

Title: A Sleeping Dragon 05 May 2010 1:37 am
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww and he hasn't even realised how awesome Severus has just been, letting Ron visit and everything! Ron's reaction to both Harry and Severus is going to be very interesting ^^ I look forward to it.

    That whole chapter was such a roller coaster. The first couple of scenes really tugged at the heartstrings! I was cringing for the both of them; Harry's pain is almost palpable.

    And how can Severus doubt how much he means to Harry after that reaction to his Potions result? Sure, Harry needs it for his Auror career, but they had just discussed how much Harry really wanted that. Heh, and Snape's such a Slytherin, using 'Prince' just to get Harry curious. Very nice touch ^^

    I don't exactly quite know what a semester or finals week is, but I'm glad it's almost over for you :)

    Will be patiently awaiting the next update ^^

    Fabsx

    Author's Response:

    Interesting is going to be the word with Ron's visit. lol. It was a roller coaster of a chapter, but at least it ended on a high note. ;) Severus is a little insecure, and he's worried about Harry's acceptance of him. I'm sure Harry's reaction to his Potions grade helped, but they have a ways to go yet. 

    A semester is what most US high schools and universities use to divide the school year up. There's a fall and spring semester. Finals are the final exams that come at the end of each semester, usually one per a class, but sometimes you just have a paper due at that time or no final at all. Thanks! 

Title: A Sleeping Dragon 04 May 2010 10:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry did as well as he did. Of course, his Defense grade is completely undeserved, but that's Umbridge for you. I have a feeling that most of her students got Dreadfuls.

    I'm glad that Harry has finally agreed to see one of his friends. I hope that in time he will come to accept Severus' new role in his life and to understand that he didn't know that Harry was his.

    Author's Response: I'm sure Umbridge's grades were totally out of whack. Good thing she doesn't have anything to do with OWLs. I'm sure Harry will come around. It's only been a day so far, and he's really at a lost of what to think and how he should be feeling. Harry's needs time to process the new information and to think about it before he figures out how he's really feeling. Thanks!
Title: A Sleeping Dragon 04 May 2010 10:30 am
Reviewer: Lia (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't like this .. I dont mean the story ... just that Harry has cancer ...... It's almost as if someone I know has cancer - depressing. Everytime you update, I get scared and dont wanna read but cant stop myself ... I open the chapter hoping Harry has got well. But he never does. It is depressing.

    Author's Response: Cancer is a depressing thing, and it's not something that can be fixed overnight. Harry's in for a long journey, but you shouldn't be scared. Focus on the lighter moments inserted throughout the chapters. I have some more of those up my sleeve. ;) Thanks!
Title: A Sleeping Dragon 04 May 2010 9:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it. Awesome chapter. I am so glad that Harry is finally seeing Ron! And I loved all the heart to heart talks Severus is having with his son.

    I liked how Snape lost his temper... his thoughts... he is so much in character. Harry is really interesting too. Loved the description of him at the end of the chapter with the partial mohawk! XD Great chapter! Well worth the wait.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry is finally going to see Ron, and I predict it'll be very awkward. The heart to heart conversations are some of my favorite parts to write. You learn so much about the characters from them. Yay, I'm so happy to hear Sev's in character for you. I couldn't let him loose his temper, and I predict future father/son clashes because they both have that temper. Thanks!
Title: A Sleeping Dragon 04 May 2010 7:39 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been home most of the day recovering from dental surgery. I took that time to reread my favorite story! Thank you for the update. Even though Harry is still upset and still doesn't have the full story about Sev being his dad, he still seeks him out for comfort. Our two men will be fine. I love the fact that Sev has finally getting through to Harry that he can be anything he wants to be. Just because other people want him to be an auror doesn't mean it's the right fit for the kid. I love the Flurry made an appearance too! I love that little kitty. I wish mine had a 50 yr life span. I await your next update!

    Author's Response: Eww, dental surgery! I hope they gave you good meds. I'm sure they'll be fine, too. They need to go through an adjustment period, more so on Harry's part, but being together nearly 24/7 and Harry's cancer will help speed up the process a bit. It always seemed weird to me that Harry would end up an Auror after being hunted his whole life, and I wanted him to have options. Thanks!
Title: A Sleeping Dragon 04 May 2010 7:05 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel bad for Harry in this chapter since he feels so uncomfortable with Snape saying that Harry's his son. I hope he gets comfortable soon, and I can't wait to see how Ron reacts to everything. Great job as always. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not entirely sure Harry isn't comfortable with it because it's Severus, but more so because he really isn't used to even the idea of having a living biological parent. It has to be a complete shock and he was only told that morning, so it may be some time yet before he's fully comfortable. 

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