Haha. That was a good story, short; but with everything in it. I read it all today, and never suspected the last bit. Love it. 20points.
Wanted to review after I had read what you had up. I really like this story. In some ways it's so cute and sad all at the same time. Poor Harry nothing ever actually ever works out for that poor kids. You know though, with Jen and Harry studying each subjects they may wind up with a "mastery" in two!! Kind of exciting in a way. Thank you for a wonderful story so far. Can't wait to see how our "beloved" Sev comes along.
So glad you updated! :) I think it's great - what will Snape think of Jennifer I wonder? Are you going to make Snape more of a father figure, or a more equal friend?
Aw, I love the Weasleys. Imagine that Ron still wants to share an apartment with Harry, even though Harry lives above Snape's.
It's cute that Harry thought that Jennifer was a Princess.
Great chappie. Glad that you've updated.
I'm so pleased that Snape finally saw the real Harry, and changed his behaviour towards him.
Harry sounded so sweet at that age; poor child. :(
GReat chappie.
I'm really glad to see this story continued!
I really like Jennifer and I have a feeling that she and Harry are heading toward being more than study partners and friends. It is actually a good thing that they are studying together. It is very useful for both of their apprenticeships and perhaps they will both find themselves growing fonder of the ones they were given accidentally. Fate often has a funny way of helping you out, while appearing to only make your life more difficult.
Awesome, I love it. What a fresh story. I wonder what Snape will have to say about Ron and Jennifer. It's nice that Mrs. Weasley was there to help Harry fix up his place. Great chapter, thanks for posting it!
Excellent chapter. I really enjoyed how you brought the Weasley's back in and what you've got going on with the 'princess'.
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It's great that you updated this story! It has a great potential.
I wouldn't wont the Ron for house mate... He can be sometimes great mate, but also he can be self-centered, uncomprehending, jealous, lazy and spiteful... As you can see, I don't like him very much... I can see him as a man who can hold a party, make a lot of noise and mayhem and don't take into consideration that maybe Harry want a quiet home - and because Harry is Harry, he will stand aside and let him, because the most important is that others have a good time, of course, it doesn't matter what he want... Maybe Snape will teach him a self-confidence...
And I hope that Harry and Jennifer will be together =o) It would be interesting watching Ginny when she realized that she doesn't have a chance with Harry. Yay!
So I'm looking forward the next chapter! =o)
P.S: Sorry for my mistakes, English is not my native language.
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