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Title: The Forest 16 Dec 2009 10:33 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry is okay. You know, I never did quite understand why they allowed first year students to help Hagrid with the unicorn search in the Forbidden Forest; always seemed...I don't know...odd. Harry could have been seriously injured or killed out there. If Severus hadn't had that bond with him he might never have been found.

    I wonder if Harry and Draco will ever find some common ground or will they always be enemies like in Canon? I have always felt that given the chance they could be the best of friends...

    Great chapter!
Title: The Forest 16 Dec 2009 8:54 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter, I really like Harry with Snape, and snape is really being nice, I thought he would blow up when he saw the duel. Please post soon!
Title: The Forest 16 Dec 2009 8:03 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I fixed your AAAAAAAAAA! for you. It was way too long and created horizontal scroll bars, making it hard for people to actually read your story. When letters or symbols are placed one after another without spaces the create a really long line, and can't be broken to start a new line when the page is supposed to "end." That was the problem. Now you know. :)

    Author's Response:

    Ah, thanks for the heads up and for fixing it.  I had no idea it did that.

     

    Best,

     

    -Jessica

Title: The Forest 16 Dec 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.
Title: The Forest 16 Dec 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Something is definitely wrong with this page JA. It runs right off the page making it hard to read.

    But it was a great chapter, and soon as the techinical problem is fixed I want to read it again. I think that Snape was really worried about Harry.

    Author's Response: Yeah, that's wierd.  I've never seen it do that before, and I have no idea why it's doing it.  I uploaded it the same way I always do.
Title: The Forest 16 Dec 2009 1:04 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
Title: The Forest 15 Dec 2009 11:32 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry should still get in trouble for dueling Draco, and Snape should decide that he wants Harry...

    Author's Response: Harry did get into trouble for dueling Draco.  He got detention in the Forbidden Forest.  It wouldn't be right for Snape to punish Harry twice for one thing... parents just don't do that.
Title: Losing Sleep 15 Dec 2009 2:23 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
Title: Losing Sleep 15 Dec 2009 10:54 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus finally understands how Harry feels and hope that he will find it in himself to admit that, deep down, he does want him. Then he will have to convince Harry that he isn't lying, which won't be fun. Severus will make a splendid parent for Harry once he allows himself to do so.
Title: Losing Sleep 15 Dec 2009 8:53 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Harry needs to see that Snape is changing, that is why he is worrying. What about Dreamless sleep? Would that help. Can't wait to read next chapter.... Great story!

    Author's Response:

    I've seen a lot of stories that go along that line: Harry has nightmares, Snape gives him dreamless sleep... or Harry has nightmares and steals dreamless sleep.  I thought about using that here too but I think there's a better way than drugs all the time for all emotional problems, so I'm going to forgo using that potion here except maybe one time.  Dreamless sleep only treats the symptoms, not the problems.

    Thanks for your review!  All reviews are appreciated!


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