I love the way you’ve captured the tension between Severus and Harry, it makes sense that with Harry’s older age there would be more challenges in bonding. Thanks for the wonderfully long and full chapter.
This was an emotionally packed chapter. I love that Severus wanted to know about Harry and that Harry was willing to share. Very nicely done.
I’m so glad they connected, even if briefly. Ron has never been a particularly loyal or astute friend, so no surprises there. Thanks for another great chapter!
| Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare
| 28 May 2022 1:35 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Amazing chapter! It was poignant, angsty, moving - everything one could ask for. I can’t believe you wrote those amazing five chapters in one sitting! What brilliance.
This was amazingly angsty. I loved it.
| Title: The Secret That Petunia Kept
| 28 May 2022 1:18 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I really like this version of Draco. He’s mature enough to see Harry’s situation for what it is, and perhaps to see a benefit to camaraderie with his Head of House’s son. Great chapter.
I really appreciated the deeper dive into Harry’s psyche and the turmoil he’s experiencing. Thanks for another riveting chapter.
| Title: James Harry, not Harry James
| 27 May 2022 4:58 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is a wonderfully intense and angsty opening chapter. I love this story.
I love it when I do something as amazing as writing and entire like 5 chapters of a story in one sitting...and then I go and can't even get out three paragraphs bc writers block is a bitch.
| Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare
| 05 Feb 2021 8:12 am
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| Reviewer: Bodo71 (Signed)
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I love this story, wonderful work!
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