| Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare
| 08 Nov 2009 1:56 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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i love it!! Great ending. :) Yes, it's short, but the ending was a great place to end.
Wow. Fantastic chapter. Snape is eating himself up, but not nearly as much as Harry. I feel like things are going to come to a crisis state for Harry now. Wow. Great chapter!
| Title: The Secret That Petunia Kept
| 08 Nov 2009 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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i like Draco helping Harry out. I think it would be good to learn more of his reasons for helping Harry, like maybe he doesn't want to be a Death Eater and being Harry's friend would make a powerful ally, ect. I'm glad that Harry knows what's wrong with him, and how to get relief now. Maybe he will go to Madame Pomfrey now. Good chapter.
| Title: Another Glorious Day
| 08 Nov 2009 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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oh something is seriously wrong with Harry here. :] Poor kid. How long can he go like this? I really like your portrayal of Ron, as short as it was. It was very much in character and with his spirit. Draco was very in character too. The teenage angst Harry is going to is nicely described, especially hating the 5th year Slytherin he didn't know... I liked that Harry just walked away from his detention. Very typical of a teenager acting out like that, I think. Great job.
by the way, your chapter titles are showing up twice at the beginning of every chapter. They are set to show up automatically. You should probably delete the ones you have in your story text.
| Title: James Harry, not Harry James
| 08 Nov 2009 1:31 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow. Drama. Great job on Snape and I am interested on what has gone on with Harry to make him so angry and want to be called James. Good beginning. :)
| Title: The Secret That Harry Couldn't Bare
| 07 Nov 2009 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Ooh, you should continue on with this story. I really would like to see more of Snape and Harry's relationship and Draco form a friendship with Harry, and perhaps find out more about Draco's life too.
Great job, but I want more.! :)
Oh my God!! I can't believe that Snape just did that. Then again...this is Snape we're talking about.
Oh, I hope that Snape is going to apologise for that, and that they'll make up, but I'm worried now that that won't happen now.
You have really nailed Snape's character well JA. Well done, as usual.
Author's Response: Yeah, I was going for one of those, "OMG!" moments there. Thanks for your reviews, as always!
| Title: The Secret That Petunia Kept
| 07 Nov 2009 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, I'm glad that Draco has changed and is helping Harry.
Why do I have the feeling that Harry is about to be caught pissed drunk, and will reveal all his secrets. Yikes. Poor Harry. Or...maybe lucky Harry. Maybe that's a good thing.
Oooh, the plot thickens. Poor Harry, he's jealous because "he" wants to be the one to be able to confide and have Snape be there for him, but doesn't understand his own feelings.
Nice chappie, on to the next...
Author's Response: You are psychic, lol.
| Title: James Harry, not Harry James
| 07 Nov 2009 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Waves hand. I know, I know.
He must have found out that Snape is his father...am I correct? Oh, and he's pissed about it!
I would be too. LOL.
I always love your stories JA, and this is no exception. Nice work.
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