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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 9:12 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the boys enjoyed their caroling, not including the Malfoy incident of course. I find it amusing that Severus thinks that he can't sing and everyone else loves his voice. Makes me wonder why he feels he can't sing...

    Lucius got what he deserved! Pity he won't remember much about it. It's good that Harry won't have any lasting damage to his vocal cords. If he had, I think that Severus might have arranged for even more damage to be done to Lucius.

    So...now Augustus has figured out the truth. I hope that Severus won't try to continue to lie when he is asked about it. Eventually, the truth will have to come out and I hope that Severus is prepared for the inquiry that is bound to happen. It's pure luck that Lucius mentioned his own suspisions, allowing Severus to obliviate him, but if he figured it out once, he could again.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Sev in this story has an inferiority complex sometimes, a legacy of his nasty father always putting him down.

    Yes, he did and if Harry had anything permanent happen to him, Severus would have gone and kicked a certian wizard's ass . . .over and over.

    Well, Augustus has figured out SOME of the truth--that Harry is the BWL.

    Severus wouldn't lie if questioned directly by his grandfather. And yes, he is prepared for something even worse than that to happen, which is why he's evaded the issue all these years.

    Yes, Lucius certainly could figure it out again and you never know . . .he might just do it.

    Thanks again!

Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 8:15 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I vote for velvet or lily, but they are all great. great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and there's a new one up!
Title: Winter Wonderland 06 Jan 2010 7:53 am
Reviewer: littlestacy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snozberry? Whoever heard of a snozberry?
    How many times has that qoute come up in your reviews?

    Really enjoying this story, keep up the great work! The kids were adorable. Loved little Neville, I wanted to hug him.

    Harry definitely needs a kitten. If only for the extra shot of cuteness it would provide.

    Author's Response:

    Yes he sure does!

    Uh actually I think you're the first to mention it. I was surprised because I love Charlie and the Chocolate Factory or Willy Wonka if you're going by the movies.

    Please read on and you'll see if he gets a kitten or not.

Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 5:04 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Of thoes name I would vote for Noel. Or throw in Patches becasue of her Patches :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks again! Hope you enjoy the next chapter I just posted.
Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 4:02 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, so many names to choose from, I was thinking about Lily since that is Harry's mums name, but then I was like... no, Lily is too special and shouldn't be related to a cat. Noel sounded like a good one if Harry wants to remember that he got his kitten on Christmas. I really like Sharmila and Callidora. Those names just sound so unique... If I have to pick one, I would go with Sharmila since it means comfort, joy and protection, it would be cool if the kitten protects Harry. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Okay that's a great name!

    Hope you like the next part I've just posted.

Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 4:02 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loving the story! I vote for Calin.

    Great job on Malfoy!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 3:57 am
Reviewer: SugarQuills (Signed) [Report This]
    What the paper reported about Lucius was pretty funny and awww Harry finally gets a kitten! I think a good name for it would probably be either Calin or Velvet.
    And Augustus is getting closer to finding out about Harry. Will he in the next chapter? I wonder how Sev would react?
    Whoo can't wai for the next chapter! Keep up the lovely work

    Author's Response:

    Yeah that's a sweet name, either of them.

    Umm not the next one but in 3 chapters he will. Severus will be quite shocked.

    The next one's posted so hope you like it and thanks for reading.

Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 2:53 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh what a mean old wizard! how could he hurt poor Harry like that, im glad that Severus did that to him hehe, I like the name Calin, its meaning is cute too :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and so do I.

    Lucius needed taking down a peg and that's just what Severus gave him. And karma . . .or Father Christmas . . .took care of the rest of it.

Title: Noel 06 Jan 2010 2:30 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--you had me very worried about Grandfather there for a bit-I'd rather not lose him any time soon.

    As tempting as it would be to vote for lily, I think I like Maeja.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and don't worry about Augustus, he's a tough old python and will be around for a long time.

    I think Maeja's a pretty name too.

Title: Winter Wonderland 05 Jan 2010 10:11 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Nev is so cute he's so proper and shy it's sweet that Harry in a way is encouraging him to open up. Harry boy he still is one happy troublemaker ^_^ though glad to see Sev get out there and have some fun, I can't wait to see more of his elemental powers! Kitten for harry? Sure if it has a Severus attitude! And this is all I have to say to Malfoy *blows raspberry(S)*

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! Neville will be in the next chapter I just put up. And yes, Harry is and probably always will be, a little troubemaker! Sev's elemental powers will be showing in a future chapter. Ha, I think all cats have a Severus attitude mostly.

    Good one and just wait till you see this update!


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