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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Liar 25 Jul 2010 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *sad sort of chuckle* I agree with Sprout. Way to keep it canonical to both fanfic and original ;). Kudos.

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! Glad you like!!
Title: Liar 25 Jul 2010 6:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    What it comes down to is simply this, Umbridge is a bitch and Severus is a nasty git and there is really little Tobias could have done to make things better. He shouldn't be punished for telling the truth, but he probably also does need to be a bit more politic in what he says and does. It's interesting that so many of the 'purebloods' in Slytherin are in actuality non-human. It's not hard to imagine Draco as an elf and I can easily wonder if Crabbe and Goyle have some troll in them, but I am very curious about Nott. That Tobias couldn't even identify what he was is quite interesting. I also wonder about Blaise and what conclusions he has come up with in regards to Tobias. Does he suspect who Tobias really is???

    Author's Response: :0) So many questions!! You'll just have to see. Thanks so much for the review!!
Title: Liar 25 Jul 2010 5:09 am
Reviewer: X (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hehehe he's still harry, of course he's a deliquent :) and i LOVED the scene with malfoy! and blaise! i hope he'll prove to be helpful... and what's with most of the purebloods having their blood less than sparkly clean? sounds fishy, it does! it's as if they interbreeded with people deliberately to gain some of their powers. underhanded powerhungry snakes

    Author's Response: :0) Really glad you liked. Thanks for the review. :0)
Title: Liar 25 Jul 2010 3:22 am
Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey,
    I read your story for some time now and I must say, your story is really good. At first I thought it is one of the Superpower-Harry-Stories in which he is a mixture of at least two different species I really often encounters in German which is one of the reasons why I settled to read English stories.
    After I read the first few chapters you proved that thought of mine wrong because Harry really had problems with his new life. After a few more chapters I came to the conclusion that Snape is Harrys father and it seems wit every new chapter more fitting. So either my conclusion is true or you are really good to let people settle to false conclusions.

    Now to your new chapter. I really like the way Harry, no Tobias is now and the way he deals with problems. To purposely get into detentions only to say his opinion is something he did in the book also but in the book he tried to stop himself before he got into serious trouble. So six detentions in one day I count as a real improvement of character. It was really time he stood up against Snape and even if I like Snape, I must say it is good that someone voiced against his opinion. Because of this I would have liked to read about his detention with Snape in this chapter. So I have to wait for the next one. Shame on you, you have me checking my mails for your new chapter more often then I do now and I thought look for mails once or twice a hour would be bad.

    Beside the detentions I am eager to read more about Blaise and the other Slytherins and also about Harry dealing with the government. I hope he can convince them to stay at Hogwarts for his remaining years despite the fact that he is their heir.

    All I have to say now is, that this is the longest review I wrote in English and one of the longest reviews I ever wrote. I think it is even longer then some English tests some of my class hands in. I apologize for any mistakes or bad formulations but we learn only formal English in school and things I most likely will never use. I don't write reviews in general because I can't write the things I want down in German probably and write them in English is not really better but I really like your story and I will try to write more than this one.

    Kuroi

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks so much for the lovely long review!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I really appreciate the effort you put in. That said, I can read German, so if it would be easier you could just review in your native language. :0) Thanks again!! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!!
Title: Liar 24 Jul 2010 8:34 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    i love this story. loved the update.

    Author's Response: Thanks!!
Title: Liar 24 Jul 2010 6:42 pm
Reviewer: frostedmidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    an awesome chapter, as always! I have been reading every chapter, but my phone won't let me review, so let me first say I read loved all the ones I didn't review as well! I love this story, and always do a little dance everytime you update. I look forward to seeing what happens next! If I don't review, know that I am reading and loving anyway ;)!
    Until then,
    Frosty

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!!
Title: Fairy 23 Jul 2010 6:04 pm
Reviewer: SentinelHuntress (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely! :) what else can I say? ;)

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!!!
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *chuckles softly* That went...well. That Mo is too adorible. I'm glad you're continuing to update this story. Kudos on a well written chapter.

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! Glad you like!!
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Is there a way to beg for a quick update without seeming like a child banging on table with a spoon, chanting for more pudding? I didn't think so.
    P.S. Love the 'Puffs (and the common room).

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!! You made me smile. :0) (And I'm updating again today!!)
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Blue Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    love the chapter and wish it was longer, but if that means a quicker update i dont mind :) not sure if i have reviewd before (i lose track i read too much ff) but i dp love this story and i am sticking whith it (somthing i dont normaly do with WIP's) can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you like so much! And thanks so much for the review!!

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