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Title: Daddy 03 Mar 2010 7:01 pm
Reviewer: shigeki11 (Signed) [Report This]
    hello,

    what did I say about the worm? Forget it, I'm going to take the hook, line, and rod!! This is driving me crazy!!! =)

    as amazing as this chapter is, I can see the action you're just dangling in front of me. ROAR!

    thanks for writing, and keep up the good work!

    your most frustrated reader,
    ~shige

    Author's Response: LOL sorry, it's just not time yet. It'll get there soon, I promise. :0) Thanks for the review!!
Title: Daddy 03 Mar 2010 5:35 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome........hoe for more soon^^

    Author's Response: Working on the next chap of my other story at the moment, but I'll get back to this one as soon as I'm done. :0/ Anyway, glad you like! Thanks for the review!
Title: Dark Fairy 03 Mar 2010 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the way u write Mo. I was wondering if u have been arnd a kid that age. I havent but think u are bang on.

    Also, u describe things pretty well..

    Author's Response: LOL no, I don't have a kid - I'm only 20 - but I did help raise my younger sibs, who are 13 years younger than I, and so I just did a teensie bit of research to help me remember and then wrote. Thanks for the review! Glad you like!
Title: Daddy 03 Mar 2010 3:54 pm
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Rhiannan ( Love ur name),

    I read this story for the first time today and loved it. I love all the different creature, err, People species in the story, love Harry's description ( specially that he does not have angel white wings).
    It is so different from ur other story, which I follow as well.
    My only problem so far is Harry's status as the Prince. He gets pushed into the Magic-wonderland and fnds himself the most famous, one of the richest and from one of the oldest families. He finds himself here in the fae-dom and he is the prince. Wish he finds himself to be a creature but just another normal one who has to fight his way, get things done, rise up through the strength of his character alone.

    Well, now that I have satisfied my habitual nitpicking, let me once again say that I am loving the story so far. Wonder when Snape enters the scene.

    Lia

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And yeah, I can understand about the prince thing. I was unsure whether that was where I wanted to go with the story, at first, but then I kept coming up with these ideas and they high-jacked the whole story and so here it is. Hope it doesn't bug you too bad. :0) And thanks for the review!! Again, I'm glad you like it!
Title: Daddy 03 Mar 2010 12:46 pm
Reviewer: nyeneave (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to say i really love this fic.
    By the way is there a way to track the story?
    I`m new you see:)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! If you favorite this story, and give the website your email address, it should send you emails when I update. Glad you like!! :0)
Title: Daddy 03 Mar 2010 9:59 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to go with my gut and Harry's; he is best off not falling in to what the Unseelie Court wants. I think that Harry and Mo are far safer living anonymously. I know that Harry intends to return to Hogwarts during the school year and have a feeling that the Court wouldn't allow him to attend. He will have to be far more careful if he wishes to keep out of the reach of both the Court and Dumbledore. I hope that the purpose behind the tattoo is accomplished.

    I am beginning to get very curious as to whom Harry's father is. Is he alive? Would he be willing to help Harry in his quest to protect Mo? (Is he Severus? xD) I have a feeling that Harry got his 'other' blood from his father's line or perhaps it was hidden in both as a recessive gene.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! Glad you liked!! LOL you'll have to wait and see.
Title: Daddy 03 Mar 2010 7:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, yeah right, Harry!!!

    love, love, love this story! It is awesome. I am teased with all the possibilities of how Harry will be caught. He's toeing the line, even though he thinks he's safe. I wonder if he will turn himself in, or if he will be caught. I hope that he will be caught. I also wonder when Snape comes in. Is Snape a "big folk" too? Awesome, awesome, awesome story. Please, please, please update when you can! Can you tell how much I like this story? LOL

    you have amazing descriptions, and a fabulous universe. Your characterizations are grand too. Love the history and back story of this little known side of the wizarding world.

    Love it!

    Author's Response: LOL yeah... it's not THAT stupid, right? Right? Guys? Help me out here? Anyway glad you like the fic so far!! I'm enjoying it, too. :0) Thanks for the review!!
Title: Dark Fairy 03 Mar 2010 7:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter!! :) i love the idea of the book being a messaging system. The court seems really good, with great morals and ethics. Harry probably doesn't have much to fear, but you never know.

    You don't have to fix urls on P&S to show up. This is not fanfiction.net. Urls work here. You could even have the picture show up in the story text if you wanted, as long as it wasn't too wide. I fixed your end author's note for you so that the url would show up right.

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks! Both for the review and for fixing the url. The pic was huge, though, so I'd rather people just look it up if they're interested. Glad you liked! Thanks again!
Title: Dark Fairy 27 Feb 2010 10:59 pm
Reviewer: X (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow, this really gives a unique and interesting outlook on all the creatures (People, rather :)) i love it, and i really hope you'll see it through to the end. i hate it when promising stories get abandoned. i'm usually not into creature!fics, but i'll gladly make an exception for this one :D

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like, and don't worry - I don't abandon fics. I mean, I can't REALLY know 100%, since I haven't finished any fic yet, but as yet updates have taken no longer than about a month, and usually under three weeks, and I've been writing for almost a year. I love my stories, too. I can't imagine abandoning them. :0) Thanks for reading! I'm glad you make the exception! :0)
Title: One of Those 27 Feb 2010 8:14 pm
Reviewer: X (Anonymous) [Report This]
    heehee wasn't boring at all :) loved reading petunia's hysterics :)

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the review!! :0)

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