Wow. You've created such an amazing universe. The creatures, the places in Knockturn Alley and all the government. It's amazing and I love this story. Great work!
Author's Response: YEY!! Glad you like so much!!
Great chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yey! Glad you like!
Wow, awesome chapter!!! Great development. I am glad that Harry knows more about who and what he is. It was interesting but also sad that he lost his "one." And the poor boy, he really does have a lot going on now. I wonder who will be sent to try and find him, and when they will find him. This is an awesome story. Please write more when you can!!!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like! Yeah, Harry's got a lot going on right now, poor guy. Thanks for the review!!
| Title: Demon
| 23 Jan 2010 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: Hotshot_gurl (Anonymous)
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Hopefully Harry will find time to read the whole book before he is found.
Keep up the excelent work!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the review!
Another wonderful rollercoaster of emotions for poor Harry. But he is starting to adapt--if unsteady about it, and he is starting to accept little Mo.
Will "running" give him time to sort out his feelings? after 2 days will he return to Harlot and the "home" he felt he had there? And will he willingly meed the Sidhe or keep hiding? I am SOO curious--just call me George! (all I need is a man with a big yellow hat. . .)
Looking forward to your next update! I'm still loving this world you've built here.
V.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry. He's dealing with a lot right now. LOL I'm glad the story leaves you wondering. That's good. :0) Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it!
Poor Harry! All he wants is to be just a normal Joe, but it seems his life is determined to make him special. I can't blame him for avoiding the Unseelie Court for now though. He needs time to absorb everything that has happened to him over the past month or so. It would be difficult for him to do so if he's being fussed over by strangers.
I find the information about the Deatheaters simply facinating. I can't wait for Harry to discover who some of those spies might be.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked!! Thanks for the review!!
Poor Harry! So much is being thrown at him in such a short amount of time and at such a young age. First came the changes to his body, then discovering that his father wasn't his father, biologically anyways. Then he's handed a baby and told that she will die without him and now he's told he's the heir to a throne. It's a wonder he's still sane. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm thoroughly hooked! Great story!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And yeah, Harry's life right now is just a -tad- frenetic. Thanks for the review!!
| Title: The One
| 13 Jan 2010 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Woodi (Anonymous)
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Wow..looking for new chapter :)Love it.:)
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!!
Would give it 25 but the numbers don't go that high!!!
Author's Response: Yey!!!! So glad you liked it so much!! Thanks for the review!
| Title: The One
| 10 Jan 2010 4:17 am
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| Reviewer: Saowe (Anonymous)
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I think your story has really great potential. Nonhuman cultures are my favorites, be it in fanfiction, or original work. I especially like the fae, I'd really like to see how you imagine they world in detail.
And you're killing me with this chapter ending! Telling the truth I started just to skim this story first (a have a bad habit of doing it) but got hooked up quite fast. Now I'm cheking back twice a day to see if there's more.
Author's Response: Yey!! I'm glad you like it so far! And no hard feelings for the skimming - I do the same thing. I'm glad you decided to settle down and read it. :0) Thanks for the review!
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