Midnight Wind is my vote!
'eclipse' and 'new moon' lol, never in a month of sundays, they remind me way too much of twilight.
I like 'Midnight Wind'
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| 15 Jun 2010 11:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Loved the chapter. Truly a wonderful take on everything. A name, hmm? How about Star Onyx? Star in honor of his silver hooves, and Onyx for his coat. Of course, it's your decision, but it is an idea. Kudos on a well written chapter.
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Jun 2010 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Yes, loved the conversation between Harry and Hermione. Sometimes you need a friend to tell you like it is! She really got harry to see how he was acting, and Hermione adopted, is she from a magic family? Great chapter.
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Jun 2010 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: PeriwinkleKitty (Anonymous)
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Allo there!
What a great chapter! great work, as per usual. Thanks for writing; I was missing my other regular update fic. It is now complete, and I have moved on to Moon Fire as the thing I religiously go to P&S to see.
Please, don't use the name onyx. It's so stereotypical.
I hope Hermione finds peace, and I hope to see more bonding from her and Severus, but also Severus and Harry.
About unicorn names...
Monomensis-> One Moon, Greek
or, if you like Latin
Uniluna,
But I really like Monomensis better.
So Hermione wasn't born a Granger? I wonder who her birth parents are and why they left her in a park? Is there more to the story than meets the eye? I have a feeling that the pendant will be key in proving that she was that baby and might even help them to discover who her birth parents are or were.
I hope that Harry really did absorb what Hermione was trying to tell him. He needs to learn to be careful what he says. I know that he didn't actually mean to be insulting to Severus, but he shouldn't have said it to begin with.
Names are difficult, aren't they?
Midnight
Shadow
Eclipse
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Jun 2010 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Beautiful!! The secret of Hermione was quite a surprise, but it lends further mystery to the story. I also liked that pieces between Harry and Hermione. They show that Hermione will always be a guiding hand for Harry (let's face it, he is VERY temperamental, isn't he?)
Great chapter!
Mice twist in your story! So will she be from a magical family after all? Enquiring minds want to know! ;-)
That's great! I loved all the gifts and think they'll really make use of them and hopefully will stay alive through the battle to come.
Cool! I loved it! Maybe she'll give them Animagus forms? I thought it was great that she chose Severus!
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