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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Spy 07 May 2010 4:54 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonoderful chapter as always. I want to see Moon Fire get Wormtail in the worst way!!!! Pretty bad injuries when ever Lucius wants to pitch Wormtail. Thank you for the update.
Title: Midnight Spy 07 May 2010 11:06 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Hermione has remained strong and hope that she will find that inner fire that tells her that she is more than good enough to rub shoulders with anyone. Perhaps having regular visits from her friends will help her to do so.

    I think what Harry did to Wormtail was a good first step to winning Moon Fire's trust once again. I hope that Harry will be able to trigger his memories of being Severus as well. All three of these children need him to be back to himself and soon.

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Spy 07 May 2010 10:48 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. I hope that Harry is well hidden. It wouldn't do to get caught sleeping in this place.

    I am glad that Harry is able to take care of Moon Fire a bit. I thought that once her got to the Manor that everyone would be free and run off, but I suppose that Moon Fire has to heal a lot more before he can make the trip back home. Too bad they don't have a portkey or something.

    Great chapter! thanks for the update! I have been missing them. :)
Title: Midnight Spy 07 May 2010 9:07 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It is a bit slow and I am eager to see them free, but I think you are doing it well. Because that's how things are in real life too, that things we want don't happen fast enough!

    Though having Harry in that miserable place for more than 2-3 days might be inviting trouble.. After all, Lucius is smart and strong magically even if he is a evil git.
Title: Midnight Spy 07 May 2010 8:26 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so glad that moon fire is starting to trust harry. Good for harry, wish he would have sliced pettigrew in half, but I know now is not the time. Great chapter, please poost soon!
Title: Midnight Journey 03 May 2010 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If that is not a cliffhanger, I don't know what is.

    While I love this story and I understand the torture required to make it believable, I cannot stand animal abuse. One of the geldings at the stable where I ride at was whipped liked that; it took months and months of gentle handling for him to trust again. And then a woman bought him and reversed all the positiveness we'd put into him with a few well placed spurs and the use of a crop. If I ever get my hands on Lucius Malfoy...

    There are so many things I want to say in this review, but I'll bite my tongue because I don't want to spoil the surprise for the other readers. I will say this and I know you'll get it: How will Amicus react?

    An angry stallion is one thing, but an angry /unicorn/ stallion is another issue entirely...

    I know this is short and not very detailed, but I hope I've made your day with a review.

    Update soon. You know I'm always watching for them in my inbox.

    Yours,
    Julie
Title: Midnight Journey 24 Apr 2010 2:06 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good that Harry has gotten to Riddle Manor safely; now the true adventure has begun. Will he be able to rescue his friends and loved ones without issue or will he be forced to face Deatheaters or even worse, Voldemort himself?

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Journey 23 Apr 2010 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, oh wow! Poor Moon Fire! What a mess!

    I really hope that harry will be able to get all of them out of there! Wow.

    Amazing chapter and story.

    I enjoyed the scene of travel through the stars. I knew Titania was Selene!! I wonder what boy she will bring for the Dryad.

    Great job!
Title: Midnight Revenge 21 Apr 2010 6:38 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Now I really want Pettigrew to die! I hope Moon Fire stomps him! And wouldn't Harry be protected from the dryad's kiss because he loves Hermione?
Title: Midnight's Guide 21 Apr 2010 6:37 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I hate Bella and I hate Pettigrew and Lucius1 Hurry Harry get over there before they do something terrible to your friends!

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