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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Disaster 15 Apr 2010 8:23 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well that was exciting, poor moonfire and hermione, i do hope sev doesn't transform into himself now as that might just give the game away to the death eaters. well minervas reply won't help anyone as hermione has been captured
Title: Midnight's Guide 15 Apr 2010 8:15 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice chapter!
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 15 Apr 2010 7:57 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well that was good and moon fire is well on the road to recovery, well his physical injuries at least
Title: Midnight's Guide 15 Apr 2010 11:54 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good that Hermione is feisty. If she wasn't she would probably break and that wouldn't be good. I wonder what Hermione will do to Bellatrix?

    If Draco is careful, he might be able to get Moon Fire into decent shape. If he gets caught, though, it will be very hard on both of them.

    I'm not at all surprised by the arrival of Amicus. He is an excellent choice and might even be able to help Moon Fire regain some of his memory. I kind of expected Titania to arrive, too.

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 04 Apr 2010 4:03 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter. Nice to see the trust between Moon Fire and Harry.
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 04 Apr 2010 1:58 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that our Stallion is trusting Harry, and that the bond between them is strengthing--even if Sev isn't really himself right now. And the Moon Lady is taking care of both of our hurting children--even if that means challenging Harry and comforting 'Mionie.

    Thank you for the update.
    V.
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was another wonderful chapter. I'm impressed that Harry stayed behind and allowed Hermione and Draco to take Moon Fire, that had to be a turning point in the trust relationship of the three.
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 12:53 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry is following Selene's advice and is allowing his heart and his instincts to guide him. I am confident that he will figure out a way to help Severus soon.

    I wonder who Hermione's beloved it? I have a guess, of course, but I have been wrong many times before and so, will keep it to myself. :D

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 12:30 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter, I log in here everyday praying for this fic to be updated. You are writing the human/horse interactions brilliantly and so far I have not become lost in any aspect of horse care or in the current goings on. I love the banner and the picture and Moonfire are a throwback to the Black, I have a funny feeling that the horse in the banner is from 'The Young black Stallion' as the mysterious moon stallion that sired Shetan had large shire like hooves. I will watch the scene again later to double check. Post soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your really encouraging review. I think you're right, I know I've seen that picture before. I'm so glad you like this and have updated two more times since this post.
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 9:39 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow! having Harry sleep in the barn was a brilliant idea!

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