I hope that Andromeda will be able to help them figure out how to help Severus. I'm sure that with time and TLC, Harry will win Moon Fire over enough to gain his trust. I'm just glad that Moon Fire didn't hurt Harry when he panicked; Severus would never have forgiven himself if he had.
Great chapter!
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 20 Mar 2010 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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I'm sorry, Kathy, but it's just too much for me right now.
I'm having a really bad day.
Awesome chapter! I really like the dynamics between Harry and Hermione as well as Jasmine and Moon Fire and Harry and Moon Fire. I am looking forward to seeing what Andromeda Tonks brings into the mix.
Cool chapter!!!! I adore your characterization of Harry. Moon Fire is great too. Really good job with everyone's voices and thoughts. You have great energy and descriptions in this chapter, the whole story. Great job with adding this new problem in. It is very interesting to hear Moon Fire's thoughts as a wild stallion. I hope that Harry stays safe, and that Moon Fire will start to trust him, to heal him.
Great chapter! thanks so much for the update! I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I always wanted to do a POV story with a horse and Moon Fire provided me with the chance to do that. Eventually Moon Fire will start to trust Harry some more, but right now he's scared. And a scared animal doesn't trust easily.
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 19 Mar 2010 10:40 pm
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| Reviewer: lenka (Anonymous)
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HI:) great story:) I wonder, does Harry know how to do that spell that would allow him to speak with horses? Will it occur to him to use it? :) cant wait till next chap....
I'm a bit leery of Mrs. Tonks, but they don't really have a choice do they? Jasmine is good for Moon Fire. Hopefully Mrs Tonks will just tell Harry she's not in heat yet and let her keep Moon Fire company.
I liked Snape's books. I thought it would be funny if there had been more than one vet book and one smacked him. Not enough to hurt him, Hermione has enough to deal with, but just enough to make her giggle. She could use a laugh.
It is good to see that your Dumble sleeps. Many fanfic writers make him be in his office days and nights.
(end of quick reviewing - up here I have read the story on my iphone during last two days .-) Mila
Hahahaha the small unicorns are so funny :)
What a suspicious behaviour from a horse :O Mila
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