This is amazing, pure talent you have. This is my favorite fic I have had the pleasure to come across. Thank you. You make everything believable, I even cringed when Harry hit Severus. I was hoping he had merely hit an arm or the chest. I was scared to read more when his nose was bleeding. I like how you have Harry talking to Selene without him even realizing it. As far as I know, most people do that, drawing upon their God(dess) until one day they do so and feel like they've been hit by a ton of bricks.
I wanted to say, I had a dream which had me researching Cerridwen and realized the post I made about Brighid wasn't fully accurate as I think Selene was kind of branched for Wales between Brighid and Cerridwen, but Brighid is also an Irish Mother. I have much more researching left to do by any means.
Oh, and before I forget, CS Lewis also had a Talking horse teach a boy to ride. Very interesting piece to read. I forget the name of the book as I only had an excerpt of it found in a book of horse stories. If you are interested, I can find the title. Anyway, I wanted you to know that the warp speed is much loved!
another great chapter. i love the quick updates!
Oh this is great I look forward to more see yah!
I'm glad that Harry was upset about the deaths of his relatives. It shows that he has a compassionate and loving soul and is nothing like they were. Severus is right; it's easy to have regrets about what could have been.
I blame much of what has happened on Albus Dumbledore. At the very least, he should have personally checked with the Dursleys to make sure that they were willing to take Harry in. He should have also made sure that they would love and care for him as if he was their own child. Harry's life was filled with hunger and despair and it could have been prevented so easily.
I think he should do it really soon. The longer he waits, the more upset Harry will become at him. It would probably be best if he tells him before they return to Hogwarts.
Great chapter!
That was a great chapter. Loved the interaction between Snape and Dumbledore. I also thought the part where Snape walked in on Albus having his "air bath" was funny. Reminded me of Potter Puppet Pals. LOL!
Loved the end and how they have finally started to bond.
| Title: Midnight Regrets
| 08 Mar 2010 7:33 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I love how sev is helping harry adjust, and glad dumbledore is finally seeing what he did to harry and sev. Harry shouldn;t forgive him yet. I don't think sev should tell harry about his being moon fire yet, harry is adjusting to too many things now.
To DS, I liked the part about Dumbledore air bathing. To me it sounds just what JK Rowling would write for him. Then again I have a friend who walks around skyclad all the time. Of course we live in the country so being arrested for indecent exposure is highly unlikely and I do so myself after a shower or while doing something I'd forgotten about until I happen to be dressing.
"Our bodies are our temples" and if you like scant decorations, decorate yourself as such! I personally have a catfish theme going...
"You've got something against grass?" Considering the man eats it, I'd say not. Surprised he didn't take some in with him for a snack!
I'd say he could prolly tell Harry about Moon Fire in a couple of days or tonight. He needs to tell Harry more about Selene and talk about his initiation, which, if I remember properly is a segway into MF, right? Didn't he get MF sort of as an initiation "gift"? I need to double check that...
Loved it! I felt so bad for Harry and Severus, but what Sev said was right. I'm glad harry didn't just forgive Dumbledore for being so blind and stupid--he really should have known better.
| Title: Midnight Regrets
| 08 Mar 2010 3:16 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Brilliant characterization here! I loved the conversation between Albus and Severus and also Severus and Harry. I think it helped a lot for Harry to hear Severus tell him that what he felt was a normal reaction and to not be ashamed of it.
He needs to tell Harry about Moon Fire as soon as he can. Before Harry thinks he betrayed him.
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