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Title: The Basilisk's Duty. 16 May 2010 5:20 pm
Reviewer: firefox (Signed) [Report This]
    wow!! this sounds awesome. i just know i'm going to enjoy reading this! your explanation of salazar is awesome!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really hope you enjoy the story.
Title: Epilogue 16 May 2010 3:56 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I truly loved this story. The way you presented the true nature of snakes (a very misunderstood and distrusted creature in the western world) was very enjoyable.

    My only question is that in the times that Severus felt the presence of Lily, was she there, trying to protect her son?

    Looking forward to more and to HP and the OotPegaus

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you've enjoyed this story and my pro-snake perspective; despite a few, notable exceptions, snakes are generally very sweet, loving and intelligent pets. (This makes them a good metaphor for Slytherin; the House attributes are very valuable, useful and not, in themselves, dark at all, however almost everyone, on encountering a Slytherin, thinks (or is told to think) 'dark wizard, must stay away', which can become a self-fulfilling prophesy.

    In my universe, the 'veil' is particularly thin; the beloved dead can make their presence felt and subconciously influence people. Therefore, Tobias, Lily, James and, now, William may pop up now and again. Thanks for all your reviews ^^ 

Title: Ever Onwards 16 May 2010 7:26 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter! Your changes to the House Cup ceremony were creative and cute.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I thought that Severus really would strangle Dumbledore if he made it 50 points and, because Harry, Ron and Hermione hadn't lost all those points for being out after curfew/ irritating Severus, the differential between Gryffindor and Slytherin was narrow enough to allow it.
Title: Ever Onwards 16 May 2010 4:42 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Cute, cute, cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it ^^
Title: Ever Onwards 16 May 2010 2:50 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Dumbledore! You really shouldn't have done that. Giving points for idiotically heroic behavior is never a good thing, as it will encourage repeats of said behavior, even if the amounts are small.

    I'm glad that Harry finally bolstered his courage enough to go down and see Hissy. I know that the events of that night scared him, but she was only trying to save him and didn't deserve his avoidance. I hope that he has lost that fear now that he has once again visited her. The story she gave about the weapons was fascinating and brought a definite human element to the incredible legends surrounding Slytherin and Gryffindor, which I feel is a good thing.

    And now the first school year is over and what a ride it was! I hope that their summer will be full of good times and no danger.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. Yes, Dumbledore is incorrigible (and rather crafty- he is raising Harry to be the savour of the Wizarding World) but the children were overjoyed by their points and, besides, I couldn't have Dumbledore abstaining- it just wouldn't be in character lol! I'm glad you enjoyed Harry's meeting with Hissy and the story of the blades; I've always wondered why Slytherin's locket was gold and Gryffindor's sword was silver when, in fact, they were each other's colours and my two theories were 1. the sword/locket were gifts to each other or, 2. they swapped metals for their Hogwarts crests. I can imagine tanned, muscular Gryffindor feeling a bit of a twit with his shiny, white-gold jewellery and slender, pale Slytherin cringing at the 'bling' factor of yellow gold: they'd both suit each other's metals so much better lol!

Title: Ever Onwards 16 May 2010 2:27 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I just realised that I haven't commented on your portrayal of Blaise. I really like his little non-sequitors and aloofness. He seems like the person in cannon, but also well-developed.

    thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like my portrayal of Blaise; the canon character is a real gift to any fanfic writer as 1. we only see him in book 6 and, secondly, we're only given snippets of information, both of which grant a writer a great deal of scope for developing his personality because, of course, what he is at 15/16 isn't what he was as an impressionable 11 year old. Blaise is one of my favorite characters to write: he's inspired a little by Oscar Wilde, who was a very kind man with a dry, cutting wit.
Title: Ever Onwards 16 May 2010 1:44 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw:) I loved the end of this year. Though the whole thing with Hermione is very sad, I think that the way this chapter was written, it gave a sense of hope. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I know the situation with Hermione was upsetting and I really was in two minds whether to plot the fic that way. However, it was necessary for the next story in the series. I'm glad this chapter raised the tone a little; I didn't want to end the story on a sad note.
Title: Ever Onwards 15 May 2010 10:37 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    really enjoyed the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Ever Onwards 15 May 2010 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great way for the year to end! I think the reasoning, with Dumbledore only giving 5 points, is sound and I like how Harry went to see Hissy again. It sounds like an interesting summer lies ahead.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^^. Yes, Harry's next summer should be very interesting indeed ^^. 
Title: Melodies of Life 15 May 2010 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Sweet, but sad...a very poignant chapter. The grief that Hermione and her mother share is so real. I'm glad that Hermione has wonderful friends to be with her. Studying and school life in the fall will likely help her too. I think I feel worse for Jean Granger; Hermione is at school for much of the year and then she really will be alone. I suppose she can keep busy with work, but it will be very hard.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I'm glad my portrayal of mourning seems realistic and, you're right, Hermione will find many positive distractions from her grief. Jean, whose husband was her only relative (other than Hermione) and closest friend, is definately going to feel the pinch more: she is no longer safe in her hometown and Voldemort, if he rises again, could find her in an instant unless she bases herself at Uroborus. However, there is a muggle boy, a de facto orphan, who needs a home to come back to during the school year...


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