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Title: Alone 06 May 2010 11:24 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL chapter! And I like how they really tried to get adults to help too. Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought it'd be more in character for Slytherins, whose House values planning and cool calculation, to at least consider their options before charging ahead.
Title: Alone 06 May 2010 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Arggh to cliffies! Great chapter btw :P Kudos.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I know, I do love cliffhangers but at least you won't have to wait forever for the next chapter ^^
Title: Amnesty -vs- Avenging 06 May 2010 7:33 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so sorry for not reviewing every chapter, but this story has been so good, that I forget to in order to get to the next chapter.

    I love how you are bringing cannon events into the story while still making the plot your own. Really great job on characterization and plotting. I'm in awe.

    T

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm really glad thay you're enjoying it ^^
Title: Alone 06 May 2010 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutley loved how they reacted when they found out what Harry was up to. I think that going to Dracos' dad was a really good idea too! Too bad neither he or Dracos' mother were in. I cant wait to see how the stone saving goes in the coming chapters, great job!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ Well, Lucius was an obvious choice, even more than the children could have possibly realised considering Lucius' position: not only would he know who had definately turned their backs on Voldemort, he would be able to summon half-a-dozen warlocks to accompany him.

    I'm glad you liked the kids reactions; away from the Gryff influence, Hermione has become rather more cautious and calculating and even Harry trys to think through his options. Draco's fury, Blaise's cutting sarcasm and Theo's tired resignation I thought were all in character ^^.

Title: Eye of the Storm 05 May 2010 10:12 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry won't be discovered by Quirrel and his companion (who, of course, is Voldie). It's just his luck that the Room would malfunction and put him in harms way. Interesting that Quirrel is able to speak Parseltongue, but I suppose it is because of how very 'close' he and his companion are. :D

    I'm glad that the examinations went well and are finally over. Now it's time for the children to have a little fun. I wonder how long it will take for the other children to begin to wonder where Harry is and start to inquire as to his whereabouts?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I don't think that the room actually malfunctioned; my idea of Hogwarts is that the castle has a degree of sentience- how else would the shifting staircases have not resulted in any deaths! In DH, the Room of Requirement is able to place its exit anywhere in the castle and, as it never places the children directly in harms way, one wonders whether it 'senses' people with evil intent. If so, the RoR might have decided that Harry needed to know about Voldemort's plans and taken the opportunity to eject him in a place where a. he could hide and b. he could overhear their plans. Quirrell is able to speak parseltongue because, as you suggested, he and Voldemort are sharing a head.

Title: Eye of the Storm 05 May 2010 5:02 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! Now this will definitely be interesting to see how your version is played out, I cannot wait to see what you have coming up! And I think that little chapter you added in about the dragon was great! Lucius is very Slytherin in that one;) Great job!!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 46: it was great fun to write ^^
Title: Eye of the Storm 05 May 2010 2:04 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh! How exciting! It's going to get really action packed soon. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^ Yup, we're heading towards the end-game; I hope you'll enjoy my version ^^

Title: Eye of the Storm 05 May 2010 1:26 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooh very interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^ I hope you'll enjoy it- just working on it now

Title: The Basilisk's Duty. 04 May 2010 5:54 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice interlude to tell an important part of the backstory.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I've always thought that Slytherin's reputation did not sit easily with the facts; why would Gryffindor, Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff have trusted a vicious, cruel, dark-arts obsessed killer, much less been friends with him?
Title: The Dying of the Light. 04 May 2010 5:51 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an interesting premise. You've kind of turned the whole abuse genre on its ear. It's also too true that females can be very abusive, even if they think they are doing something for the 'child's own good.'

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. Even in the canon, Petunia always seemed the main abuser; even though Vernon's a narrow-mindend bully, Petunia's hatred is so much deeper and darker. She's such a spiteful, resentful and jealous woman that I thought I wouldn't have to change her too much to fit the story. (Vernon, I know, has been altered quite a bit in that I've given his character a shot of empathy; however, to mirror Harry and Severus' lives it was necessary.) 

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