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Reviews For When the Boat Comes In
Great chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I agree; Severus is much more worthy of respect than many others who, having lead easier lives, have never erred and Harry can see that, even though Severus made a mistake, he tried his best to rectify it.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This has definately been one of the tougher chapters for Severus, more down to his own low self-esteem than anything else as he think's Harry will judge him as he's judged himself
It was good of Severus to tell Harry the truth, but update and soon. Author's Response: Thanks for the review; update is already uploaded ^^ Hope you enjoy it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review; I'm glad you're enjoying my portrayal of Harry
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I've tried to base my Severus's personality on the canon preteen/teenage Severus, who is gentle, considerate and sweet- all I've done is make him rather more sophisticated lol! Harry is, indeed, highly intelligent and very empathetic but Severus has been treated with so little true kindness and has such a low opinion of himself that he is frightened that Harry will judge him as he judges himself.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review; yup, Hagrid is living the dream ^^
oh. crap. you would. *sigh* (by the bye - i think you did a great job with this conversation. i hope that harry is okay and that severus is able to talk him into seeing sirius and that sirius isn't too much of an idiot. maybe remus will help?) Author's Response: Thanks for the review; yes, I know I'm mean but updating every day means that I can afford to tease you all with one or two cliffhangers ;) I'm glad you think I did a good job on the conversation; it's always rather difficult to get dialogue to sound natural and spontanious, even when one of the characters is someone as erudite as Severus.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review; Severus definately had a tough childhood- all the exteunerating circumstances are there. However, I can't say any more because I don't want to give away spoilers |
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