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Title: Painful Truths 22 Apr 2010 7:34 pm
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww. I like how Harry is so sweet in this fic.
    I wonder though, did you intentionally have Harry act young in your mind when you wrote this?
    I know that children who have been denied a parental figure sometimes regress a little. Sort of making up for what they missed.

    Congrats on a great story, looking forward to reading more.
    regards jay.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^ As you've suggested, Harry does regress into the behaviour of a younger child, especially under highly stressful circumstances. In the last few chapters, this is especially pronounced as Harry has just lost Voldemort's soul shard; that nasty little voice is no longer disparaging him and, therefore, Harry is slightly off-balance and, as he's considerably more confident in his emotions, he's rather needy and does not scruple to conceal it. Also, Harry has Draco as a role model and Draco acts rather younger than his years around his parents, especially his doating Dad.

    However, Harry often acts with a maturity which is far greater than his years, (i.e. his sentiments towards Ron when 'Scabbers' died), so he's a mixture, like most abused children.   

Title: Painful Truths 22 Apr 2010 5:47 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sheesh that was some chapter. SO much information had to be given to Harry, in both parseltongue and English! I hope Harry does end up talking to Sirius, maybe then he would be able to have a good relationship with Sirius and Severus. And maybe they will too;) Anyways, loved the update great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; Harry's had a rather eventful half-term, hasn't he?
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 22 Apr 2010 9:39 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, so the last chapter was a false alarm. Harry will be able to speak Parseltongue again.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; although it was a false alarm in a sense, it teaches Harry to value his abilities and is proof that the horcrux is totally gone.
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 22 Apr 2010 2:23 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah, here you go! So he will be able to regain the ability to speak parseltongue! That turns it into a full out gain now - being rid of the evil soul part and getting back what he lost...
    And hurray for Hagrid, who'll get the chance to become an educated wizard and the (responsible...) owner of a dragon!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Hagrid's luck has definately changed for the better ^^
Title: Swings and Roundabouts 22 Apr 2010 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry losing his ability - but I guess it's a small price to pay for the liberation from the horcrux. But can't he get the ability back the same way Severus got it - from Hissy? He wouldn't make a good bonded to the basilisk without being a parselmouth after all... Maybe you've a solution all figured out and I'm just worrying for nothing, so I'll rather go on reading... Great story!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, Hissy can teach someone a language in seconds but, if it knocked a highly-trained, naturally-skilled legilimens like Severus sideways, you can imagine what sort of strain it would place on Harry's unexercised, developing mind. Just because a strong-man can lift 380kg doesn't mean a child will also be able to do so.
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 21 Apr 2010 10:36 pm
Reviewer: malimed (Anonymous) [Report This]
    okay. momentary heartfail last chapter, but this was so freaking cute!!! (and really, even the hysterics over harry's lost abilities were kind of funny. especially reggie.) bravo!

    Author's Response: Thanks: Harry and Reggie's hysterics were intended to be sad, cute, and, as they are hysterics, also somewhat funny. However, I find it even more amusing to imagine's Severus's face when confronted with two wailing hatchlings lol ^^
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 21 Apr 2010 10:01 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    At least, Harry now knows that he will be able to speak Parselmouth again. He will have to wait a bit until Hissy feels he is ready, but that is a small price to pay. Admittedly, it is hard for a child Harry's age to wait for anything, but with Severus' support he will survive....xD!

    I'm glad that Hagrid might not have to give up Norbert this time. It would be a terrible loss for him if he did. With the support of Severus and the children, I am sure that they will find a way for his dragon to stay.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; Yup, Hagrid gets to be a dragon mummy and Harry will, in time, be able to speak Parseltongue again ^^ As you suggest, the waiting will be hard but Harry will soon discover that learning via legilimancy is not the most easy of methods.
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 21 Apr 2010 9:16 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I'm so glad Hissy will be able to teach Harry Parseltongue again! I can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Hope you enjoy the next few chapters- there's plenty more twists and turns to come ^^
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 21 Apr 2010 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yay! These lessons with Hissy are definitely going to be interesting:) I cant wait to see how they play out. Hopefully, Harry doesnt get too disappointed if he isn't able to learn it right away. Great job with the chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; I hope you enjoy the next chapter- the first 'subchapter' concerns Harry's first lesson.
Title: Dark Lords and Dragons 21 Apr 2010 6:53 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome!! This story is getting with every chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks: I'm really glad to know that ^^

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