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Title: Valentine Recursat 23 Mar 2010 10:30 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like when authors include more about Charity B.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, she's such an underused character and, considering how little we actually know about her, provides such scope for the author to form her personality.
Title: Interlude: Letters. 23 Mar 2010 10:22 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Lucius, the affectionate father. I like it. I wonder about Narcissa...

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Lucius always did overindulge Draco in the canon and, in DH, it's clear that Draco is Lucius' world, so I though that casting him as an affectionate father would be a realistic approach
Title: Revelations 23 Mar 2010 8:03 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, what a lie! Bad Dumble

    Author's Response:

    Yup and a very dangerous one as well. However, Dumbledore did accept that he was wrong and try to make things right. (In this fiction all characters are going to have their failings and, sometimes, things will come out in later chapters which shed light on why those decisions were made.)

    Thanks for all the reviews: I hope you're enjoying this story. 

Title: Prefects and Physicals 23 Mar 2010 7:49 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Pomfrey should not lie to children :(

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I know. However, sometimes one simply has to choose the lesser of two evils; Madam Pomfrey could either a. told Harry the truth and risk him refusing medical examination or told him a little half-truth. If she chose option a. Harry would probably have refused, which would have meant either allowing his abuse at the Dursleys to continue or having Harry forced to undergo medical examination. (One could argue that Madam Pomfrey could have tried to reason with Harry but, considering his history- as indicated by his terror of having his injuries discovered- it was almost certain that Harry couldn't have believed that he would be removed from his Aunt until it actually happened.)

    This decision was, as I have suggested in a later chapter, a very difficult choice for Madam Pomfrey but, ultimately, she had to do what she thought would cause least harm to her patient in the long run. A little deception or standing back and allowing a child to be abused for another seven years: which would you choose?

Title: Potions Prodigy 23 Mar 2010 7:46 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    reading all night - yes, i makes sense

    Author's Response: Lol! We've all done this, I suspect; while some of the knowledge might have stuck, our ability to convey it (being half asleep), is rather impaired Thanks for the review
Title: The Basilisk's Duty. 23 Mar 2010 6:58 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice view of Salazar

    Author's Response: Thanks. I've always felt a bit sorry for Slytherin: he's never given the benefit of the doubt, despite being a. the founder of a school, b. 'hero' Gryffindor's friend and c. living at a time when muggles put mages to the fire and sword.
Title: The Dying of the Light. 23 Mar 2010 6:56 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting approach

    Author's Response: Thanks
Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb 23 Mar 2010 9:19 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    This was such a lovely addition to your story. I like how Harry picked out treats for everyone except for himself and how Severus, knowing that Harry would do that, made sure he had something of his own. A pleasure to read.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thought it would be a very 'Harry' thing to do; become so wrapped up in his gift buying, that he'd forget himself. Severus, of course, could guess what Harry was up to ^^
Title: The Pensieve 23 Mar 2010 8:55 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry will need time to really absorb what he saw and draw the parallels, but I'm sure that he will soon begin to see that he is no more to blame for his treatment than Salazar was. With the support of his Basilisk and housemates, he will find his way once again.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Harry will gradually realise that he was blameless and he will have support from a quarter that he could never have anticipated ;)
Title: The Pensieve 23 Mar 2010 6:27 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great way to show a child it is not his fault the way he is treated. Good job sev, great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter

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