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Title: The Pensieve 23 Mar 2010 5:13 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter and how much thought you have obviously put into this story. This is such a unique and interesting idea and viewpoint of Salazar Slytherin and the founding of Hogwarts.

    Bravo on such a wonderful tale! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks: I'm really glad you're enjoying it ^^
Title: The Pensieve 23 Mar 2010 1:53 am
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well! I am continuing to like this story very much, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy it.
Title: The Pensieve 22 Mar 2010 11:56 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE this - it's such a beautiful read. One thing - when you said Harry was a Parseltongue, I think you meant a 'Parselmouth', but this is just a small nit-pick in an overall lovely chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ (Yes, I know: I had written 'He speaks Parseltongue', then changed it to 'he's a' without revising 'parseltongue' to 'parselmouth' and uploaded without proofreading. Silly me lol)

Title: The Pensieve 22 Mar 2010 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the chapter, now Harry can finally that he is not the only one. That it has happened to other people and even his professor. Hopefully he can start to believe that he was never bad, and it was Petunia. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. Abused children often blame themselves and, if they can see that other, completely innocent children have also been abused, they can, as you say, realise that the fault does not lie with them.
Title: The Pensieve 22 Mar 2010 10:29 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL chapter! Poor little Harry! I think that will help him a lot though. Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I'm glad that everyone is being so positive about 'pensieve therapy'; it's a harsh technique but desperate times call for desperate measures
Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb 22 Mar 2010 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, what a fun shopping trip! I'm glad that Severus saw that Harry had a good time and got some of the things that he needs.

    Harry did a great job picking gifts for everyone!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry deserved a nice day out and a chance to have both the things he needs and a few luxuries. I'm glad you think the gifts were appropriate
Title: The Dying of the Light. 22 Mar 2010 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just finished the first chapter, and I am very intrigued. I am really liking your "alternate history Potterverse" stories. Can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy this story
Title: The Pensieve 22 Mar 2010 9:42 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, I just have one tiny nitpick. Parseltongue is the language, a parselmouth is someone who speaks parseltongue. Harry would be a parselmouth not a parseltongue.

    Author's Response: You're quite right: I uploaded this chapter off before I left this evening and, in my haste, I didn't do my proof reading: I had originally written 'He can understand parseltongue' and then altered the sentence without revising the word. Silly me lol. 
Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb 22 Mar 2010 5:01 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the shopping trip went well and that Harry is beginning to believe that Severus does like him, even if he is still a bit unsure. It's good that he finally has glasses that help him see clearly. Severus has taken the time to spoil him a bit, which is excellent and will hopefully begin to convince Harry of his sincerity.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. You're right; Severus' care, shown in his ensuring that Harry has the nessecities of life, will help heal Harry a little. However, Harry's going to need sustained reassurance to recover properly 
Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb 22 Mar 2010 3:58 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww! This was cute! Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it

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