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Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb 22 Mar 2010 3:27 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was a cute chapter:) I love how Harry is during the shopping trip, he acts just how I always thought he should have when first buying things once he entered the magical world. Im glad he is starting to think that Snape really likes him, hopefully he will believe it one day. Though I cant wait for the next chapter, even if it's going to be a doozie. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I agree; Harry has been deprived (and told that he deserves to be deprived) for so long that he'd feel undeserving of any purchase, however cheap. (Possibly, as he was using his own money in Diagon Alley, he didn't feel quite so uncomfortable as he would if someone else was buying it.)
Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb 22 Mar 2010 3:23 am
Reviewer: Slythindor (Signed) [Report This]
    That chapter was very good. I enjoyed the exchanges between Severus and Harry. One question when asked where Harry recieved his glasses you said NHS what is that???

    Author's Response:

    It's the National Health Service: an organisation which provides free healthcare for everyone in the UK. NHS glasses have been pretty ugly until recently (thick plastic rims, etc) and, of course, kids tend to get embarrassed about poverty, which having a pair of such glasses would obviously imply.

Title: Uroborus 22 Mar 2010 2:10 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful, restful place for Harry! I'm glad that Severus has taken him to this safe house and hope that being in such a peaceful environment will help him begin to heal.

    And the letters from his friends are wonderful too. I hope that Harry will begin to realize that people do care for him and like him.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. Uroborus was designed to be a holiday home for psycologically damaged children: one which was peaceful, safe and comfortable. Those who were sad and listless, could sit in the bright, airy rooms, listening to the sea and reading one of the house's many books, those who were recovering, could wander around, discovering the house's many secrets or enjoying it's resourses and children who wished to play could enjoy the sun, sand and sea (which is kept completely safe by one of Salazar's other little secrets ;)

    I'm glad you enjoy the letters; they're great fun to write :)  

Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 9:34 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Superb chapter. You describe the Slytherin haven so well that I felt a peace stealing over me as I read it. The letters, as well as Harry's accompanying thoughts were a nice touch. Harry would find it hard to believe that anyone could care for him at this stage. The hug and gift toward the end as well as the revelation of just how much money Professor Dumbledore has given Severus for Harry's care helped to round the chapter out nicely. A very enjoyable read. Thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I really wanted to make 'Uroborus' a reflection of Slytherin's paternal side, much as the Chamber of Secrets is a reflection of the warrior aspect of his character. I also wanted to allow Dumbledore to redeem himself a little not by giving money as such but rather the guilt that influenced the gift.   
Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 7:52 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My favorite part of this chapter is the letter from his friends. Hopefully he will now understand how important he is to them. And Sevs story about Lucius, too funny! Great chapter. Love the story.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. A parent's stories from childhood are always rather strange and funny because it's often hard to realise that those who looked after us were once in need of protection themselves. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter
Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 5:47 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it
Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 5:47 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait to see what's next!
Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 2:37 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Those letters were an excellent way for Harry's friends to tell him that they care and were worried about him. That he can't quite comprehend that they do think of him as a friend saddens me, but I hope that with time and support he will be able to believe it to be true. I think that Draco's letter was especially good at showing him this.

    I hope that Severus will use this time well and show Harry that he is worth being cared for. Harry needs the caring support of an adult to truly learn that what his relatives taught him was wrong. He is a wonderful child and deserves to be loved and treated well.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the letters. Yes, it's sad that Harry finds it hard to believe that people care about him but, after all he's been through, it's a natural response. Draco, of course, being as fiery as his father, is the most direct and, therefore, his message is very clear lol!
Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 1:19 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have really enjoyed the last three chapters:) I thought that the chapter with the ice cream was a great way to get the fluff fill before the gritty stuff. Speaking of whihc, I really liked how you did write Snape and Harry both going through a rough time at the same time. I am suprised that no one in the story thought Harry might just be going through something because of Halloween and all. I cant wait to see how Harry and Snape go through the week holiday though. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; thought that the 'ice-cream' chapter might be a good foil, considering how depressing the next chapter was. Harry was going down-hill slowly but surely from the second week of term, i.e. early September, and, as he was pretty woebegone from the beginning of his Hogwarts education, most of the teachers just thought that's the way Harry was and Severus was too tied up with his teaching duties and his work for the Order to notice the subtle changes. I expect some of the teachers would have just assumed Harry's sadness was due to the fact Halloween was approaching but the kids, who had seen Harry start to go downhill in early September, wouldn't have thought it likely to be linked with Halloween.
Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 12:51 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The chapters are getting better and better =o) Well done!!! =D

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ I hope you continue to enjoy the story


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