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Title: Deliver Me 20 Mar 2010 1:19 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Super chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Kitsune-chan (Signed) [Report This]
    Just noticed that I accidentally skipped a chapter (one where Hermione was talking to the Slytherins...) now I feel kinda silly...(On a similar note, when did Severus's hair end up shorter/ cut? I might've missed something else...)

    Anyways, good chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^. Severus's hair-cut is mentioned in the first paragraph of chapter 12; as he's impersonating a police-officer, he needs to look fairly smart. (Though I'm thinking more a floppy 'Col. Brandon' type hairstyle than a crew-cut!) Don't worry, though, it'll have been regrown by the next morning!

    I forgot to add something in my answer to your last review; if you like individual, original plots, you might enjoy my other fic 'Harry Potter and the Order of the Pegasus'. It started out as an intellectual experiment; I wanted to see to see if I could weave an alternative universe- starting at the point when Harry and Cedric take the Goblet of Fire- where Voldemort is actually the hero rather than the villain. As I managed to think up a scenario which would do this (whilst remaining true to Harry's perception of events in books one to five) I decided to give the fic a chance. As I said, it is experimental- not to mention Kafka-esque- but I think it works.

Title: Interlude 2: Letters 19 Mar 2010 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, sweet letter...I love your Lucius and how he is a good father to Draco.

    Author's Response: Thank you ^^. I'm trying to create a Lucius whose 'canon' traits- i.e. bigoted, manipulative, self-interested and arrogant- are softened by humour, intelligence, wit and, of course, the great love he has for his son. (The positive traits are also hinted at in the canon but we see very little of them because, of course, Harry is his son's enemy.) Lucius is not exactly a pleasant character but he does have oodles of charm ^^.  
Title: Interlude 2: Letters 19 Mar 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Cute! I love it!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 10:31 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm quite sure that Hermione is going to do excellently in Slytherin and that the Gryffindors are going to regret what they did to her someday. Severus is going to have his hands full with this group of students...I hope he's ready to have a lot of fun! :D

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I think you're right; poor Severus is in for one hell of a rollercoaster!
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 10:31 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm quite sure that Hermione is going to do excellently in Slytherin and that the Gryffindors are going to regret what they did to her someday. Severus is going to have his hands full with this group of students...I hope he's ready to have a lot of fun! :D

    Great chapter!
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 6:41 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the picture of poppy kissing Snape on the nose, and him with short hair. I love how the slytherins are acting and how open harry is with sev. Welcome to Slytherin Hermione!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I rather like that picture too; I wish I had time to paint it lol!
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 2:56 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 1:48 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I love how Severus handled Petunia and Dudley, lol. I loved the description of how exhausted Severus was, but he managed to come through when his First-Years needed him.

    I loved how the group of Firsties is such a tight group and are working together so well.

    And I love Hermione in Slytherin!

    Author's Response: Thanks you: this chapter really gave me the opportunity to show Severus in a few different lights and to round my version of him out as a character. I thought it would be interesting to have a fully mobilised Slytherin; the kids have so much talent and, if they pulled together and made the most of their abilities, they could be a powerful force for good.
Title: Coup d'état 19 Mar 2010 1:48 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I love how Severus handled Petunia and Dudley, lol. I loved the description of how exhausted Severus was, but he managed to come through when his First-Years needed him.

    I loved how the group of Firsties is such a tight group and are working together so well.

    And I love Hermione in Slytherin!

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